Ielts: The world has seen an enormous increase in flights for leisure, business

The world has seen an enormous increase in flights for leisure, business and commercial purposes around the world over recent years.
What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of such flights?
Do you think flights should be taxed more?

In recent decades, more and more people use airplane for their leisure, business or commercial reasons because of many benefits that it has brought back to them. However, besides the benefits there has been many drawbacks need to be highlighted

Firstly, no one can denny that the greatest benefit of flights is it helps ppassenger save time. The Passengers have to spend only short time to travel for long distances even from a continent to another. The goods for export such as flowers or fruits also is transported quickly by airplane, this brings back convenience for both producers and consumers.

Consumers can receive goods with high quality and producers can give the goods to their customers' hand on time. Secondly, another positive aspect that flights offer is the safety. As we know that traveling by other modes of transport like by car, by train or by motorbike often happen accident everyday while accident for flights happen rarely.

However, besides these advantages, there are concerns for flying. One of the most significant concerns is that it damages to environment. When planes fly at high speed, it consumes a huge amount of fuel and this is a cause of air pollution. In addition, the noise created by flights affects on people who live nearby airports.

To conclude, flights which produce many facilities for human are also a cause damaging to environment and in order to tackle this problem, government should tax more on flights to collect money for repairing damage caused by airplane.

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people use airplane for their leisure------ use is okay but prefer could be good,too.
it damages tothe environment.
collect money for repairing damage caused by airplanes .

these paragraphs seem unbalanced, it will be better if you give more details in the second body, try ti put some relevant examples from your daily lives or your experiences

This is called "two questions to answer'. If you this type of the question, what you should do is to answer all points. If it is not, you may miss the point of task responses.


Could please show which part of this sentence is categorized as the main sentence? I see you merely write some clauses.

I think the reasons for both sides are not very good. And I think you should expand the ideas.
Here are my points, may not be good too but you can have a look.

Benefits:
1. Shorter the distances between people/ more convenient. (You've mentioned)
2. Pushing the development of economy, especially for tourism. Because of the flights, ppl can go wherever they want in anytime. This leads to more buying / selling behaviors. / more scenery and historical places can be found, more various culture can be spread among the public.

Disadvantages,
I think the main issue is about the potential risks of the flights. Compared with vehicles on the ground, the structure of the air rafts are more complex. Some unexpected problems are likely to happen however uneasy to be fixed. Many devastating accidents happened in the history and a great number of ppl have lost their lives.

That's all I can come up with...
Hope it can be helpful.