Write about a famous person you like. Who is this person? What is this person's job? Why do you like

essay about a famous person you like

The celebrity whom I admire is a girl band named Girls' Generation. Girls' Generation is a South Korean girl group formed by SM Entertainment. The group is composed of eight members: Taeyeon, Sunny, Tiffany, Hyoyeon, Yuri, Sooyoung, Yoona, and Seohyun.

They are talented at vocals. There isn't a single member in Girls' Generation who sings poorly. They all sound great.
Being in a large group can be hard to perform the dance routine. However, they always seem to show it easy and enjoyable every time when they perform.

Girls Generation or SNSD is one of the powerful girl groups in K-Pop history. They received hate from almost all other girl groups fans. The 2008 Dream Concert was a nightmare for them. When they performed at the event, the fans of other artists purposely turned off their lightsticks and made the whole stadium dark.

But now they are one of the most legendary girl groups that South Korea has offered. Girls' Generation has earned the honorific nickname "The Nation's Girl Group" in their home country.

The writer did write about admiration and the reasons for it in the essay. While his basis for writing is on point, the subject/ topic of his discussion is incorrect. The writing instruction called for an explanation related to a person (singular) that he admires.

He wrote about a group of people (plural) instead. He did not write the description based on the target subject. He wrote about why he admires the group rather than a person. Had he mentioned a specific person from the group, he would have met the descriptive requirements for the essay.

These are the reasons why the essay cannot be considered prompt responsive even though most of the information presented responds to the question list. It cannot pass when the main discussion requirementis not met.