IELTS - TASK1 - Write a letter to your friend thanking him/her for guiding interview

QUESTION:
IELTS - TASK1 - LETTER WRITING
Write a letter to your friend thanking him/her for guiding you for an interview. In your letter
- Explain what happened at the interview.
- Say how his guidance helped in the interview.

ANSWER:
Dear David,
Thanks for your guidance and tips for the interview of Team leader position at Tata Consultancy Services Company. Your suggestions and advice are very useful for me in my interview yesterday and I got selected in the interview.

I reached half an hour before the interview time and submitted my resume at the reception. After waiting for one hour they called for the technical discussion. Most of the questions they asked was same as the in the interview book which you gave last week. It is easier for me to answer the entire question as I already prepared from the interview book. Thanks for the interview book and I will be grateful for your help.

Moreover, in human Resource round they asked about team management, project handling skills which you had explained and given some additional points last week make me excel well in my interview. The additional points make me better in my interview. Thanks for your time and support for preparing my interview. I will give you party on this weekend. Once again thanks for your support.

Yours lovingly,
Devaraj

... the interview had already taken place.... so you need to keep this sentence in past tense.


These sentences have no grammar issues. But they don't seem to contain much meaningful and useful information. Your prompt says;


.... but this needs to be the information regarding how you did fare at the interview, what did the panel ask you about, how his advice was helpful answering certain questions etc.