Hi All,
Can you please provide me the feedback on the below letter:
Write a letter to your manager asking for a training course, which you would like to attend. In your letter explain
What the course is,
Why it is required for your job,
How you will manage work while doing the course.
Model Letter
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter requesting you to allow me to attend a training course on Chinese. Let me give you some details of the training as well the reason why I want to enrol for the training.
Last week, I started working for an esteemed Chinese client of our organization named ABC Corporation. My main responsibility of this project is to give support for our client's critical IT systems. I am expected to provide quick solution over phone whenever they face any issue accessing their IT systems. During the initial days of on-job training I came to know that many of the callers are not very fluent in English. So they appreciate if we can talk in Chinese. Further addition to that, while going through the knowledge transfer session, I discovered that most of their documents are written in Chinese. These paper works are very important to get acquainted with their IT systems.
Mainly due to the above mentioned reasons, I would like to register for a one week training course on Chinese language from LearnLanguage School. This training is for professional like us only. So they arrange online training as well as classroom training starting from 6 in the evening. I have thought of opting for the second option as that will not affect my work schedule.
Hoping for your approval,
Rims
Can you please provide me the feedback on the below letter:
Write a letter to your manager asking for a training course, which you would like to attend. In your letter explain
What the course is,
Why it is required for your job,
How you will manage work while doing the course.
Model Letter
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter requesting you to allow me to attend a training course on Chinese. Let me give you some details of the training as well the reason why I want to enrol for the training.
Last week, I started working for an esteemed Chinese client of our organization named ABC Corporation. My main responsibility of this project is to give support for our client's critical IT systems. I am expected to provide quick solution over phone whenever they face any issue accessing their IT systems. During the initial days of on-job training I came to know that many of the callers are not very fluent in English. So they appreciate if we can talk in Chinese. Further addition to that, while going through the knowledge transfer session, I discovered that most of their documents are written in Chinese. These paper works are very important to get acquainted with their IT systems.
Mainly due to the above mentioned reasons, I would like to register for a one week training course on Chinese language from LearnLanguage School. This training is for professional like us only. So they arrange online training as well as classroom training starting from 6 in the evening. I have thought of opting for the second option as that will not affect my work schedule.
Hoping for your approval,
Rims