Who can bring Change? professional integrity, profound acuity, commitment and passion

I believe a person with scrupulous professional integrity, profound acuity, commitment and passions to achieve a new horizon & touching a sky, can not only settle any challenge efficiently but even easily oust the prevailing drab status quo, with challenges settlement or reforms implementation which would be sustainable.

Is this the whole thing or just a start?

Well it was my first time to use this site, so couldn't put above writings in "Writing Feedback" rather it upload with by default category of "undergraduate essay"

Thats the whole stuff I want to get feedback about its structure... please help me... anticipated thanks.

Overall I think its good but the touching a sky part seems out of place and the even before the easily also seems misplaced. Some of the words may also be to big.

I believe that a person with scrupulous professional integrity, profound acuity, commitment, and the passionfor reaching new horizons& touching a sky, can not only conquer any challenge efficiently but can easily oust the prevailing drab status quo by implementing sustainable reforms.

Thank you to both of you for your kind help... Best