"Choosing a Career is very difficult"; thesis statement

The question is the one sentence prompt above."Choosing a Career is very difficult".Students are required to write a 250 word essay.

Fresh graduates usually believe that their lives after university will be smooth sailing.However,another hurdle awaits them in the form of career choosing.The qualificationss,skills and experience required causes it to become a difficult task.

*i don't really understand how a thesis statement is actually written so comments are really appreciated.thank you.

Fresh graduates usually believe that their lives after university will be smooth sailing.However, another hurdle awaits them in the form of career choosing.The qualifications,skills and experience required causes it to become a difficult task. which make the decision on a specific career a tiring task. In order to make it easy on fresh graduate to choose their future career they could ask their seniors for advice also they should attend a lot of courses and acquire certificates that prove their skills.

so, 1st paragraph could be about asking help from seniors and the 2nd about courses and certificates

sorry if it isn't so good and Good luck on your essay

ok.i'll keep that in mind thanks

They've given you the thesis:

Choosing a career is very difficult.

Your job is to prove that statement.

The stuff you've already written is fine for now. Use it as your introduction.