help me on creating my effective introduction for b-schools

i am telling you my points which i want to include in introduction please help me to structure it.
1. i am artistic person , i can visualise things and create a very effective things which leaves an effective remark over one's mind, and people are willing to stay in contact for long time.

2 graduation was the first time i was in hostel , i take diversity as my best teacher, i learned many things there.
3 i am fond of listening 92.7 big FM
4 i like to be social.
5 i have interest in conducting activities which i got after conducting an ever in my college fest.
6 i will tell my hobbies- art, craft, sketching, listen music, sometimes i write.
7 i gave 20 min everyday for "crazy dance".
8 sometime i read novels.
please rpl and help me with some good words to structure it..

Hi!
-You can start telling your hobbies-craft, sketching, listening to music, art...
-When listing music you can tell that you're fond of listening 92.7 big fm
-You can continue listing your telling your hobbies and tell that you're an artistic person when listing art.
-Do the same with dance and your 20 minutes for "crazy dance", and writing and reading novels
-Finish by saying that you like to be social and the points 2 and 5.

pls give ur views..
i have structured it in points and for each points i have ans ready of 30-60 sec mins.
(i take time to say.. therefore according to me . i compete it in 30 sec.

Good morning everyone, I am Sunita Kumari
1. I have completed my B.TECH in computer science and engineering from Raj Kumar Goel Institute of Technology at Ghaziabad which is affiliated to Uttar Pradesh Technical University.

2. My hobbies are listening music and I am fond of listening 92.7 BIG FM and my favouret show is "yaadon ka idiot box with Neelesh Misra"

3. I am good at art and craft, I have been doing this since 3rd standard . I have been artistic person in my college and school .

4. I enjoy dance , 20 min in my timetable is for "crazy dance" which I daily do.
5. sometimes I write and read novel.
6. I like to be social , graduation was the first time I was in hostel, it made me independent with limited budget, I was responsible for myself, there I get chance to interect with many people. I consider diversity the best teacher, it helped me to understand people better way. I learned many things there including sharing, caring, respect authority .

7. I have interest in conducting activities which I got after conducting some events during my college fest.

but my teacher said -"Please make your introduction bit interesting . This appears as if I am reading your CV, Your candidature needs to appear and be bit interesting for the selectors to hire you ."

so pls help me to structure it and in selection of words too.