Medical School acceptance essay; need help with draft

I am trying to get into Medical School, this is my first draft, it is not complete yet (haven't added details) I just want to see if I am in the right direction.

Where is the draft?

Yeah if we could see the draft or essay, that'd be greeaaaat

Sorry still trying to figure out how to upload it.

where is the draft?

It's in my account, the one where it actually shows the draft. Sorry for the blank one.