My background, research experience and motivation. Review my Statement of Purpose for pursuing phd

pursuing the Ph.D. in the Energy systems engineering

Please read and suggest me the changes.

BACKGROUND
I am writing to express my interest in pursuing the Ph.D. in the Energy systems engineering. I did my bachelors' degree in Mechanical engineering from Mehran University of Engineering and Technology (MUET) Jamshoro. It was good experience to get education from there. In my final year project I utilized my hard efforts for the removal of energy crisis from Pakistan, so I did feasibility analysis of wind farms for different cities of Pakistan. After graduating from MUET I thought to learn more, so I got admission in Energy systems engineering at National University of Sciences and Technology (NUST), Islamabad. Keeping in mind to reduce energy shortage from country I did research actively. With the guidelines of my supervisor I published my work in different conferences and journals. Now it's time to progress more. So I am thinking to do PhD in __________________from your university, which will help me serve my country.

RESEARCH EXPERIENCE
Through all of my academic career I had been maintaining a very good academic record. I had shown a deep interest in projects and assignments which involve extensive research. I have published following work.

Minimizing Natural gas consumption through solar water heating (Journal Science vision volume 19 no 1 & 2 pg: 79-83)

MOTIVATION FOR HIGHER STUDIES
My academic profile shows I have participated well in research. Now I want to learn a lot of new technologies, with new hypotheses for producing more new techniques in the field of my interest. My efforts will be to do research in technologies which is being used internationally, so that energy can be produced efficiently and shortage in Pakistan can be eliminated. Through my mature and professional efforts, I am sure that I will contribute a substantial part in the development of our country's needs. I believe that I am best candidate for the "faculty development program broad". I think that I have all the best capabilities to get this opportunity.

Mahesh, do not use this outline format in your final presentation for your SOP. Always use the essay format unless otherwise specified by the university. You have a pretty solid background academically. However, a representation of your masters thesis would have helped to better illustrate your purpose for higher study. If you can provide at least an overview of the masters thesis, that will help to improve the content of your SOP. With regards to your published work, you should provide an overview of that article as part of your essay. When combined with your masters thesis, you should be able to set the stage for the possible content of your dissertation paper. The topic of the dissertation paper should be presented in overview form as part of your statement of purpose because the dissertation relates directly to your future professional goals. Try to keep the masters thesis and the dissertation connected in terms of topic and research somehow. The progression of your skills and knowledge should have a sense of continuity at all times. The motivation for higher studies that you have outlined is not very good. It needs to be strengthened. If you can present a solid dissertation topic, with a real world scenario application, your motivation can actually be blended into that paragraph. There is a need for you to also explain why you came to the decision that the university you have chosen is the best option for your PhD course. Try to explain how you came to this decision in order to justify your choice of university. What makes this university special or what makes it better suited towards your PhD needs? Your essay has a lot of room for improvement. I do not doubt that the addition of these information will result in a better and stronger PhD SOP for you. I hope to read your revised essay, in the proper format this time, as soon as you develop and present it. Take your time. Don't rush. That is how you end up with a mediocre SOP.

@Holt thanks for review. It is my first time.. I'll try to make changes as you told.
Hopefully you'll help me again and suggest best sentense in modified SOP

Thank you