Dear Moderator,
Please provide me some suggestion on my essay.
I have completed my graduation in EEE and want to do a Master's degree in telecommunication.
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"Engineers are designers; they synthesize knowledge to produce new artifacts." Von Karman speaks to what most of us would consider the essence of Engineering: engineers create things to solve problems. I have always been fascinated by the new technologies and the creativity behind these inventions. This is why it did not take too long for me to realize what I want to be; an Engineer, so that I can also enter into the world of innovation to use my creativity for the society. Finally, during my graduation in EEE, I found out Telecommunication could be the right place for me.
It is exciting to learn to new engineering science and its practical feasibility. Throughout my graduation, I felt charged up discovering advanced mathematical theories and their practical implications on solid state physics, electrical & electronic system and communication system. I have also successfully completed my One year group thesis work on "XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX" under Dr. XXXXXXX which is selected to be published in IEEE Journal. Besides concentrating on developing my engineering skills also took part in various cultural programs organized by EEE department and participate in different inter-departmental tournaments such as cricket, table tennis.
After completing my graduation, I joined XXXXXXXX, a XXXXXX affiliates and the largest mobile Operator in XXXXXX. Here, I worked in various projects as a Core network engineer such as network swap project, HP-NMS project, and new service integration and so on which not only enlightened my knowledge but also made me a responsible person and ability to handle pressure to a greater extent. In addition to that, I work on signaling network optimization finding different signaling flaws in the network using Tektronix, which made the network more efficient. Furthermore, I continued to learn latest telecom technologies, admittedly this makes me see the logical reasoning among various technologies more comfortably ever before. Though being detached from formal education for quite some time but I hope I can recuperate cursorily.
As more than 70% of the world is under wireless network coverage, I believe all electronic equipments will be controlled through these networks in future. To provide different services, emphasis on the network security will be even more. Access network quality and optimization has often been a major area of worry for different operators. As a Communication engineer, I want to heighten my knowledge on this subject by completing a Master's degree in "Communication and Signal Processing" as this will surely render me reaching the frontiers of knowledge in a subfield quickly and keeping abreast of the latest developments.
Everyone has a certain potential intelligence, but not everyone lives up to that potential. The important matter is nature-nurture; how much of us were born, and how much are we is influenced by our environment. Considering the influence, I believe your University will give me the perfect opportunity to develop my knowledge.
..This is why it did not take too long for me to realize that I want to be; an Engineer, so that I can also enter into the world of innovation to use my creativity for the society. finally During my graduation in EEE, I found out Telecommunication could be the right place for me.
It is exciting to learn to new engineering science and its practical feasibility.
Throughout my graduation, I felt charged up (nice:)...
...participate in different inter-departmental tournaments such as cricket and table tennis.
Despite being detached from formal education for quite some time butI am confident and hopeful that I am able to proceed successfully.
Everyone has a certain potential intelligence, but not everyone lives up to that potential. The important matter is nature-nurture; how much of us were born, and how much are we is influenced by our environment.you lost me a little bit there in the previous sentence. But the following one is a good closing statement.
Good luck :)
