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Personal Statement
I have been working in AA company as a senior software engineer for about three years, and before that I had worked in a cell phone company for another three years. So I have about six years' experience about software engineering and development. I found I really enjoyed how an intractable and complex problem is located and is finally addressed.
However, the world is changeable and fast-paced and sometimes we are likely to be out of date because of millions of new and exotic ideas generated every day. Future has become unpredictable. At this time, data science, as a new field and full of numerous potential commercial chances, has become a promising choice. It has fabulous application prospects such as machine learning and automation and I can definitely benefit from it. So I spend a lot of my spare time in learning the basic knowledge of data mining. I learnt almost all classification algorithms such as logistic regression and decision tree. Coincidentally, my project manager had a chat with me where I expressed my decision and intention of switching to a new subject to him. He was so nice that I was put into AA team after that. The activities of attending several sessions about data mining and my involvement in some data mining projects invigorated me to achieve a new career in this brandy new field.
Another reason that drive me into this field is that this subject is also an exciting and interesting field to me. There are some engineering knowledge that I can leverage from my previous working experience and I am also good at math during my tertiary school. So I am sure I can be competent for such a new challenge. By applying data science, I will be able to extend my career path to a brand new level, as well as to achieve self-satisfaction and self-accomplishment.
I have chosen ANU for several reasons. Firstly, it is located in Canberra. The environment of ANU campus is good enough in comparison with some famous tourist resorts. The water would be sparking and rapping gracefully, and I can also imagine the rolling hills within the walking distance. The students there can be benefit from picturesque campus, thereby easily focus on studying. Secondly, with the rapid growth in economics of the world, a people person is increasingly needed. While I was staying in the United States for a several weeks' business trip last year, I was deeply impressed by the people who is easily to express their ideas. So studying aboard can provide me an opportunity to be exposed to many students with different cultural background, which will definitely boost my ability of being a cultivate person. Thirdly, I have known from your home websites and many other online resources that ANU is a prestigious school which is strong at engineering. This will be the right place where I can sharpen my brain as well as my skill.
In a nutshell, I am an experienced software engineer and I have already experienced many hard but interesting projects before, and I will be glad to challenge myself to be adapted to an advanced analyst in the next few years.
Personal Statement
I have been working in AA company as a senior software engineer for about three years, and before that I had worked in a cell phone company for another three years. So I have about six years' experience about software engineering and development. I found I really enjoyed how an intractable and complex problem is located and is finally addressed.
However, the world is changeable and fast-paced and sometimes we are likely to be out of date because of millions of new and exotic ideas generated every day. Future has become unpredictable. At this time, data science, as a new field and full of numerous potential commercial chances, has become a promising choice. It has fabulous application prospects such as machine learning and automation and I can definitely benefit from it. So I spend a lot of my spare time in learning the basic knowledge of data mining. I learnt almost all classification algorithms such as logistic regression and decision tree. Coincidentally, my project manager had a chat with me where I expressed my decision and intention of switching to a new subject to him. He was so nice that I was put into AA team after that. The activities of attending several sessions about data mining and my involvement in some data mining projects invigorated me to achieve a new career in this brandy new field.
Another reason that drive me into this field is that this subject is also an exciting and interesting field to me. There are some engineering knowledge that I can leverage from my previous working experience and I am also good at math during my tertiary school. So I am sure I can be competent for such a new challenge. By applying data science, I will be able to extend my career path to a brand new level, as well as to achieve self-satisfaction and self-accomplishment.
I have chosen ANU for several reasons. Firstly, it is located in Canberra. The environment of ANU campus is good enough in comparison with some famous tourist resorts. The water would be sparking and rapping gracefully, and I can also imagine the rolling hills within the walking distance. The students there can be benefit from picturesque campus, thereby easily focus on studying. Secondly, with the rapid growth in economics of the world, a people person is increasingly needed. While I was staying in the United States for a several weeks' business trip last year, I was deeply impressed by the people who is easily to express their ideas. So studying aboard can provide me an opportunity to be exposed to many students with different cultural background, which will definitely boost my ability of being a cultivate person. Thirdly, I have known from your home websites and many other online resources that ANU is a prestigious school which is strong at engineering. This will be the right place where I can sharpen my brain as well as my skill.
In a nutshell, I am an experienced software engineer and I have already experienced many hard but interesting projects before, and I will be glad to challenge myself to be adapted to an advanced analyst in the next few years.