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My name is YASIR ABD HADI. I was Born in 1984 in Iraq\Slah Al Deen. I am married and have three child. I finished high school in 2003 with the average mark Obtained 91.857%. In 2007 I have been awarded the degree of B.Sc. in Petroleum Engineering from Engineering College University of Baghdad with average mark obtained 72.601 %, The rank 22 out of 103.
I got a scholarship to study Masters in Petroleum Engineering by the Higher Committee For Education Development in Iraq (HCED).Due to the developments of modern technology and progress in all areas of life, I want to continue my studies to get a master's degree. I have chosen to study in the United States, because their education systems one of the best lush systems in the world which enables the student to gain experience and work with the best minds in the field of research subjects , where famous universities in the United States of America published a tremendous amount of research each year. As U.S.A universities are characterized by a good reputation and international fame and wide and are considered as the standard for quality and academic excellence and USA the first country in petroleum industry and have many advanced school sin this area .
I hope to communicate between my job in North Oil Company and my academic study in master .Statement of Purpose After my graduation I have worked a Petroleum Engineer until now in the North Oil Company \ Ministry of Oilin Iraq .My hope is that your consideration of my file will render a favorable decision. I am confident a decision like that will definitely change my life and put me on the verge of a bright future of which I hope your school will be the main thrust.
My name is YASIR ABD HADI. I was Born in 1984 in Iraq\Slah Al Deen. I am married and have three child. I finished high school in 2003 with the average mark Obtained 91.857%. In 2007 I have been awarded the degree of B.Sc. in Petroleum Engineering from Engineering College University of Baghdad with average mark obtained 72.601 %, The rank 22 out of 103.
I got a scholarship to study Masters in Petroleum Engineering by the Higher Committee For Education Development in Iraq (HCED).Due to the developments of modern technology and progress in all areas of life, I want to continue my studies to get a master's degree. I have chosen to study in the United States, because their education systems one of the best lush systems in the world which enables the student to gain experience and work with the best minds in the field of research subjects , where famous universities in the United States of America published a tremendous amount of research each year. As U.S.A universities are characterized by a good reputation and international fame and wide and are considered as the standard for quality and academic excellence and USA the first country in petroleum industry and have many advanced school sin this area .
I hope to communicate between my job in North Oil Company and my academic study in master .Statement of Purpose After my graduation I have worked a Petroleum Engineer until now in the North Oil Company \ Ministry of Oilin Iraq .My hope is that your consideration of my file will render a favorable decision. I am confident a decision like that will definitely change my life and put me on the verge of a bright future of which I hope your school will be the main thrust.