In the complex and interconnected world of international business, making the right decisions is increasingly important. I am quite interested and skilled in the field of management science as a result of my extensive educational background and work experience. However, if I am to prepare myself for the challenges of a successful future career, it is essential that I combine my background in management skills with further education. Such an education will give me a unique competitive advantage at my workplace. Finance is my choice of master's study realising my academic background and future goals coupled with my longstanding interest. Also, I believe the choice is due to the dynamism which the subject offers. Studying and working in the field of finance would give an edge as it involves decision making and its stress on analytical skills which I would love to hone. Though comprehensive in the curriculum, the undergraduate course offered limited scope for specialisation. I realised that a graduate course would pave the way for deeper understanding of the subject. Master's study in finance at Frankfurt school of finance and management and BSE offers and rigorous curriculum, international accreditation, CFA & GARP study content, practical approach, learning opportunities, cultural diversity and a lot more advantages as compared to any other programme I have come across. After careful consideration, I realised that Ms finance at Frankfurt school of finance and management and BSE would be my best investment for a successful career and also the accomplishment of my personal and professional goals.
What interesting offers Master's in finance at Frankfurt school? Why did you choose this programme?
Ashish, you just spent the word count constantly saying the same thing. There was nothing informative in the essay that gives the reviewer a solid idea as to why you chose to study this program. Your generalized responses do not really offer a solid idea, study plan, or career plan for yourself that would indicate a clear reason for pursuing this program.
In order to properly explain why you chose to study this particular masters program, you should present some information that relates to your future plans. For example:
1. Explain why this line of study will specifically help you advance your career. That means, you need to explain where you are right now career wise and why this line of study will help you advance your career. Be specific. Don't gloss over it the way you are doing now.
2. Look into the course offerings of the university. What programs do they offer which enticed you to apply for this course? How do you feel their curriculum can specifically help you in your future career? Speak of specific internship programs, professor collaborations, and the like.
Consider this statement a shorter version of your statement of purpose. Deliver the above requirements and you should be able to properly respond to the prompt.
In order to properly explain why you chose to study this particular masters program, you should present some information that relates to your future plans. For example:
1. Explain why this line of study will specifically help you advance your career. That means, you need to explain where you are right now career wise and why this line of study will help you advance your career. Be specific. Don't gloss over it the way you are doing now.
2. Look into the course offerings of the university. What programs do they offer which enticed you to apply for this course? How do you feel their curriculum can specifically help you in your future career? Speak of specific internship programs, professor collaborations, and the like.
Consider this statement a shorter version of your statement of purpose. Deliver the above requirements and you should be able to properly respond to the prompt.