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The Number of 3 Different Kind of Crimes in Newport City Centre from 2003 to 2012


Stacy Handayani 29 / 16 19  
May 30, 2015   #1
The line graph gives information concerning the number of incidents relating three different kinds of crime in Newport city centre from 2003 to 2012. Overall, it can be seen that burglary crime reduced over the period in question. In addition, the number of car theft and robbery cases in Newport city centre remained unchange, compared to the first time figures.

With regard to the number of incidents in Newport city centre from 2003 to 2007, the data reveals that the figures of three kinds of crime cases recorded a significant decline. In 2003, burglary crime occured in the highest number at around 3,500 incidents, while in the second place almost 3,000 car theft cases happened in Newport city centre. In addition, there were approximately 600 report of robbery cases. However, these three cases were likely to reduced over four years with the most marked drop was experienced by burglary cases, it decreased by around 2000.

A closer look at the data reveals that over the last five years, while burglary crime was consistent to decrease, car theft and robbery cases rebounded gradually to their first figures. In 2008, it recorded a hit of burglary crime to a low number at approximately 1,200 cases, but after that, the number fluctuated and finished at around 1,400. In addition, both other cases recorded an incline - compare to 2007 cases - at around 600 for robbery crime and at around 2,750 for car theft cases.



eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1,208 476  
May 30, 2015   #2
A few points;
Para 1:
Sentence 1 should be "... gives A BREAKDOWN OF the number of incidents WITH three different TYPES of crime..."
Sentence 3

the number of car theft and robbery cases in Newport city centre remained unchange, compared to the first time figures .

This should be "... although the number of robbery and car theft cases in Newport city centre remained unchange, compared to the first time figures, the latter case showed a slight increase in the end of the period."

Para 2:
Sentence 1 should be "...figures of three TYPES of crime..."
Sentence 2 should be "...burglary crime AMOUNTED TO the highest number... while in the second place DID almost 3,000 car theft cases HAPPEN... "
Sentence 3 should be "...approximately 600 reportS..."
Sentence 4

these three cases were likely to reduced over four years with the most marked drop was experienced by burglary cases, it decreased by around 2000.

This should be "If analyzed more closely, we have seen a decrease in the number of criminal cases which by far drops around 2000 listed in burglary cases over four years."

Para 3:
Sentence 1 should be "... burglary crime decreased consecutively for over the last five years..."

Hope this helps, eddy suaib.


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