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A comparison of THE
AMOUNT of crime in Newport city (...) between 2003 and 2012 BASED ON THREE SEPARATED AREAS. OVERALL, It is noticeable that burglary ...
MOREOVER, WHILE THE number of robberies (theft from the person) is A stable TREND, burglary and car theft
THE number of BOTH burglary and car theft ...
THE FIGURE OF Burglary
EXPERIENCED A DRAMATIC FALL
for four years subsequently from 2005 to 2008. MEANWHILE,
THE LEVEL OF car theft
for a year since
and stable onwards
TO THE LAST PERIOD. THE RATE OF Burglary becomes steadi
between 2009 and 2012. In 2009 and 2011,
HAD THE same
PROPORTION in 2007 and 2009. The peak of
THE LATTER was in 2004.
SUCCESSFULLY COMMANDED the lowest
PERCENTAGE of crime. THE Highest number of robbery was ...
The number of robbery felony
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Burglary was fallen down for four years subsequently
The number of robbery felony was decrease since 2006 until 2008I believe you will be the competence for this on condition that you wanna provide time to practice more and more.