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"Never relent on your last accomplishment" ; MSc Computer Science-SOP


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Jan 16, 2014   #1
"Never relent on your last accomplishment" this always gives me the zeal to work harder and aim higher. I really appreciate the world of technology where I had carried out researches on different technologies in order to garner more knowledge. I started having dreams of becoming a scientist right from my childhood which I have been nurturing till today. My university education had really helped me to achieve some milestones and I don't intend to relent on that. I see myself contributing to the world of science in the next two (2) years, and I am at present imparting computing knowledge on young ones as part of my obligations to help the less privilege.

My core interests are Human-Computer Interaction and Networking, because I intend to improve the interactions between human and computers by making it easier for the end-users to use and receptive. Also, I cherish the inter-connection of computers where you can access your files anywhere in the world. I had the opportunity to go for Networking Training where I learnt how to configure Router, Switches etc. and I practiced with Packet Tracer. Also, I achieved immense knowledge in trouble shooting different networks and I gained so much experience in blocking un-authorized access to a network using a particular firewall device. I am very optimistic that the experience I have garnered in the past would help me to do better in my Master Programme.

The other research areas that captivate my interest are Artificial Intelligence and Software Engineering. I strongly have passion for artificial intelligence which brought about concept, reasoning, learning, perception and ability to manipulate things in its own design capability. I am looking forward to the day I would develop my own intelligent agent that would help in accomplishing some tasks. I have affinity for technology and this has always ginger me to study more. On several occasions I act inquisitively by trying to know the concept behind a particular technology which I have the dream of being a renown scientist in the year 2018. On the other hand, my love for software engineering cannot be fettered, while I was in the university I was on cloud nine when I learnt in-depth about software management and engineering. After my university days, I have been attending different summits on developing applications which include G|Days (Google) using different Google apps, Developers Day among others. In addition, I went for Website development training where I obtained a certificate and I look forward to building a website for the less privilege where they could reach out to the world for succor.

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tiaDS 73 / 235 52  
Jan 17, 2014   #2
On the other hand, my love for software engineering cannot be fettered, while I was in the university I was on cloud nine when I learnt in-depth about software management and engineering.

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OP Classical 1 / 4  
Jan 18, 2014   #3
Dumi, you did not comment own SOP for Master Programme in Computer Science. Please, try and do that.
Thank you.
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Jan 18, 2014   #4
Sorry about the delay :)
The statement of purpose should portray you as (1) passionately interested in the field ;(2) intelligent; (3) well-prepared academically and personally; (4) able to take on the challenges of grad school; (5) able to have rapport with professors and fellow grad students ; (6) able to finish the graduate degree in a timely fashion; and (7) a potentially outstanding representative of that grad school in your future career.

The SOP should not be a list of your credentials or qualifications. It should help the admission guys know you as a person. Your SOP contains some of the features that it should, but I think you need to polish it a bit further.
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Jan 20, 2014   #5
Thank you Dumi, i really appreciate your contributions.


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