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SOP/Motivation Letter for Design Academy Eindhoven



LamiaNoshin 1 / 3  
Jun 29, 2024   #1
This is the statement of purpose for my application to DAE. (Statement describing your motivation and expectations concerning the programme and your studies at Design Academy Eindhoven, including your professional expectations after completing your study.)

I am looking for advice on how to make it sharper and if it clearly describes the motivation and expecatations. I think I couldn't prperly organize it. Any kind of advice would be very helpful and appreciated. Also, should I add my hobbies and be more detailed about how my work life was or how I performed there or my achievements???


To whom it may concern

Hi,
My name is Lamia Noshin and I am writing this motivation letter with great interest in the Master's of Design program at the Design Academy Eindhoven. I completed my Bachelor's degree in Fine Arts at The University of Dhaka in November, 2022. Currently, I am occupied as a Senior Staff Designer at Ollyo, a software company in Bangladesh.
With a profound interest in the Fine Arts field and a strong desire to delve deeper, I am eager to contribute to your esteemed program.

For me, as a kid who started her journey with drawing classes from her father, I was actually disruptive towards early stage drawings. It was all about colors and weird forms for me and never a proper "Village Scenerio" or "A Fruit Basket". I chose Fine Arts as my field of expertise in education because all my life I yearned for proper experimentation of something I have always been more interested in. Another take on this, would be the political and social stigma over the entire field of arts in Bangladesh. I have always looked forward to be strong in my decisions and it felt very important to break the barriers in our country that always pulled all the creative minds backwards.Throughout my entire academic career I have been persistent to my practice as an art enthusiast. I chose Sculpture as a major according to the perception of good grasp on my personal growth because no other subject offered a long term course of "Personal Projects". However, I did preferably good on all the Project courses of 4 years.

The part I enjoyed the most about my major was that I got to experiment a lot. Starting from different mediums and medias to merge them together and make something bigger out of it.
Completing the foundation years under the Faculty of Fine Arts gave me a whole new perspective and insights into the field of art and design. Within these years, I also participated in exhibitions organized by the faculty as well as volunteered through some of the film festivals that were regularly held by the Dhaka University Film Club.

Soon enough, I realized that I had developed a keen interest in the subjects like design and technical drawing too, which subsequently helped me find my path through the career as well. While submitting one of my projects based on "Experimental Typography" which I later tried to merge in the digital platform the overall interest on digital media grew rapidly because throughoughout the entire work process I discovered a number of other great experimental projects and artists.

Following my graduation, I started with an internship in an advertising agency where I had to develop social contents. The knack of experimentation only grew bigger to create a greater environment at my work places. Although later in this internship I felt like my process and thoughts somehow got confined within a box.

When I got into Ollyo - one of the leading software companies in Bangladesh; my entire design perception transformed upside down. I had a very little amount of knowledge until then and once I started my amazing journey with the design team - my goals, theories and the hunger to explore never stopped since then. There were even classes hold where I got to know about the amazing future of tech & design.

On my initial days I had fun exploring character design, illustration and fun typography creations. I worked in different projects collaborating with creative teams and developer teams.
Furthermore, I did a few branding projects and my next key-goal was to explore a bit about motion design because I was always so fascinated about motion graphics considering the fact that static designs at some point felt like having a certain limitation. Learning motion was one of the very few incident that had me clinged by the entire work process. The process and learnings of an experiment or research has always been so much more meaningful to me than the outcomes. However, I also added some value on the UI part which I think I should have an idea about as a creative designer.

After a considerably short but hands-on experiences, I strongly think I am quite ready to devote myself into graduate studies. In claiming so, I can safely say that due to my association with higher amount art and design activities, I have become fairly adept in different streams. My plans of remaining a praticing designer and serve the upcoming generation with a good designing psychology and skill motivates me to complete, first, a masters degree program keeping the focus on different sections of designing. Having studied and work with almost no structured training I look forward to a graduate program that teaches me the mechanisms of design in a more structured and thoughtful way.
My future plan involves mostly to design for a greater good. To collaborate with greater teams and lead the future art & design enthusiasts in my country in a structured and non-traditional way. I belong from an under developed country and I have always dreamt for the maximum contribution even if it's only from where I stand at present. There are a lot of people who can acquire greater design mindset and collaborate better in the real world with good guidance and nurture. With my degree and proper experience, I have always promised myself to return back to my roots and deliver the best to those people.

Therefore, I hope and look out most eagerly for the consideration of my application at your esteemed institution.
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15921  
Jun 30, 2024   #2
Please allow me to apologize in advance for what i have to say. You have not addressed the requirements of the statement of purpose as indicated in the writing guidelines. Most people tend to confuse the personal statement, which you wrote above, with a statement of purpose. A statement of purpose is not a look back at the history of your studies and interests. Rather, it is a current and forward looking at the career path that you have come to envision for yourself, which is why you feel the need to pursue higher studies in the same field.

What you need I guess is a full writing guide to follow for this purpose. May I suggest that you start with:

Par. 1 - Introduce yourself and your current position. Your duties and responsibilities, as well as your other work related interests.

Par. 2 - Discuss your college background inclusive of your thesis, honors you received, and other notable achievements as a student.

Par. 3 - Based on your college background, work duties, and responsibilities, discuss what you feel are your shortcomings on the job and what caused these hindrances. Relate it to your limited college studies. Or, you may discuss continuing education based upon your thesis from college. Either options will work well for the statement of purpose.

Par. 4 - Enumerate your work related seminars and trainings attended. Explain how you upskill yourself as best as you can.

Par. 5 - Based on the previous discussions, state the career purpose for your masters studies. Explain why this is imperative to your future career path. What you hope to achieve in this career after completing the studies.

Par. 6: Explain why you chose this university based upon your academic, professional, and personal considerations.

Par. 7: Closing paragraph

You may opt to follow this actual outline or create your own. Just remember to stick to the topics indicated above because these are the necessary requirements for an effective statement of purpose. Keep it limited to 750 words if no word limitation was given.
markzily - / 8  
Jul 3, 2024   #3
Your statement of purpose for the Master's of Design program at Design Academy Eindhoven showcases your passion for art and design, from childhood drawing classes to your current role as a Senior Staff Designer at Ollyo. To sharpen your statement, focus on specific examples that highlight your achievements in sculpture and experimental typography, emphasizing how these experiences have shaped your design philosophy and prepared you for graduate studies.

Highlight how the program at DAE aligns with your career goals and aspirations, and how structured training will enhance your skills to make an impact in design, especially in Bangladesh. With a clearer focus on achievements and program alignment, your statement will effectively convey your motivation and expectations.


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