Hello! I'm a 14 year old boy from Norway, and I'm wandering about if you could help me with my essay here. My english are realy bad, but I would be very pleased if you could help me:)
I won't post the whole essay, in case my teacher finds out that you help me.
I'm only posting some of the sentences, and I hope you can "fix them" to be much better, and correct:) Please change the whole sentence if it's wrong.
Ok. Here we go:
"My life has gone trough several changes since I started(??) the adult-life"
"Ordinary boring jobs, nothing abnormally to happen - only the same habits."
"And suddenly I became a sailer/explorer.??. etc instead of an average american."
"The journey was also well prepared. The idea was to travell, and arrive at one of the uninhabited Fiji-islands. "
"Some wind gusts?? later I arrived at the island."
"The plan was to make a little wooden house in the outskirt of the jungle, so I could keep an eye on the boat, not to mension it was much more save to settle in the outskirt instead of the jungle."
"Not a single cloud appeared, only clear, blue skies"
"Suddenly, as I stood up after drinking some water, something appeared among the trees,"
"Several of hours had past since I walked into the jungle. The weather changed, the temperature was a bit lower and it become darker. I gathered some leafes from the huge palm-trees, and made a bed in my wooden house."
Thanks a lot for your attention. I know my english is very bad, but I hope that you could make it a little better. I realy need your answer before 11.00 tonight, because I'm handing in at 23.50.
Thanks again:)
Well. Now I have delievered. It went straight to hell, thanks...
Thanks, it will be reviewed today.
EF
OK. I haven't delievered it yet. A few minutes. Could you just sweep over it? I have to delievere now, in few miniutes.
Greetings!
We try to answer all posts within 24 hours, but cannot guarantee to have them by a certain time. Here are some editing tips:
"My life has gone through several changes since I became an adult."
"Ordinary boring jobs, nothing unusual; only the same habits."
"And suddenly I became a sailer/explorer, instead of an average American."
"The journey was also well prepared. The idea was to travel, and arrive at one of the uninhabited Fiji islands. "
"Some wind gusts; later I arrived at the island." - Hard to tell about the punctuation here, out of context.
"The plan was to make a little wooden house on the outskirts of the jungle, so I could keep an eye on the boat, not to mention it was much safer to settle on the outskirts instead of the jungle."
"Not a single cloud appeared, only clear, blue skies."
"Suddenly, as I stood up after drinking some water, something appeared among the trees,"
"Several hours had passed since I walked into the jungle. The weather changed, the temperature was a bit lower and it become darker. I gathered some leaves from the huge palm-trees, and made a bed in my wooden house."
Best of luck in your studies!
Thanks,
Sarah, EssayForum.com
