PHA2016 39 / 62 4 Oct 11, 2016 #1Two developing countries in Asia, India and Indonesia have same problems about tax revenue. India where have more over 1 billion people only have a few tax revenue approximately 1 million rupees while Indonesia's 255 citizens number, there 27 million people are registered. Both countries have GDP ratio number at 11 percent. Regarding this issues, India's government has expected to collect in 4.4 billion dollar from the 64,275 taxpayers which targeted people who live and worked in overseas. In addition, India just paid 373 million dollar from 633 people who owned up. Whereas Indonesia which is trying an amnesty tax. A number 328,000 people have taken advantage when tax amnesty launched in July which ended in September. The taxpayer are politicians and businessmen. They are suspect hidden their wealth and save money in overseas bank.
Asma Raj 6 / 10 Oct 11, 2016 #2Hello PHA2016,I would like to give some corrections on your essay.... dollar from the 64,275 taxpayers, which targeted people ...Explanation: You have to put comma after 'which' because this clause is related to the India's government and not to the 'taxpayers'.The taxpayers are politicians and businessmen.Please make sure about subject-verb agreement.Keep writing PHA2016 :)
