Liebe
Aug 16, 2012
Graduate / MOTIVATION TOWARDS BECOMING PA - It all started with a crash... [2]
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^This paragraph is a few points written in too many sentences. I got the point from the beginning. No need to endorse it with drama (I understand that it may have been genuinely difficult, but the impression was created from the start. Just discussing it repeatedly could distract/tire the reader from the focal point of your essay)
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The car accident itself had
^This paragraph is a few points written in too many sentences. I got the point from the beginning. No need to endorse it with drama (I understand that it may have been genuinely difficult, but the impression was created from the start. Just discussing it repeatedly could distract/tire the reader from the focal point of your essay)