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Name: Bella Chyntia Novitasari
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bellachyntia   
Oct 16, 2017
Scholarship / "Leadership comes from within". Everyone is a leader in their own way. Chevening Essay [10]

Hello good people, this is my very first essay. Greatly appreciate if you could give me some feedback 😊

Chevening is looking for individuals who will be future leaders or influencers in their home countries. Explain how you meet this requirement, using clear examples of your own leadership and influencing skills to support your answer.

(minimum word count: 100 words, maximum word count: 500 words)

LEADERSHIP & INFLUENCE ESSAY



I do agree with the quotes of "Leadership comes from within". Everyone is a leader in their own way, consequently all of us are responsible for leading ourselves, especially for getting the best results.

My leadership skill appeared when I dealt with my anger in grief about parental divorce. I led myself to turn my sadness and anger into positive one by joining an activity that I liked namely marching band. Because of having self-discipline and problem-solving skill, I had an opportunity to lead the marching band team.

Being a leader for one year has taught me many valuable things. I took almost two weeks in influencing the teachers, coaches, and seniors who felt pessimistic to join international championship. At the end, my team and I proved that we were able to get eight trophies for each category. The happiest thing that moment was not getting the trophies, but when I was successful to let my team felt what was the teamwork looked like when everyone on the team demonstrated their role flawlessly. As a band leader, I had a big dream for my team. I repeated my words to motivate them to dare to try the new things and not to be afraid to take a big step.

When I pursued towards a bachelor's degree, I also had an opportunity to lead my class project to create an event introducing Thailand's culture. I also told my class team to dare to create the new things that differentiated us from the other classes. Getting many sponsors and media partners for the event enhanced my skills about influencing the others. The power of the teamwork made the event ran very well and exceeded our expectation. Therefore, I was trusted by my lecturer to give an assessment to all members as the score of the final project.

Right now, I am working as a corporate marketing communications that have responsibility to handle and to lead 16 hotels' marketing communications officers under my brand's flagship. For this case, I believe that leadership is not only about leading the team, but also the ability to influence and to motivate the others to work together on doing the same thing. I often need to deal with a hotel's general manager under my brand's flagship to convince them that the program which I do has a good impact for our brand. Listening is the most important skill that I need to have. By listening, I know that I can gain knowledge that may have an impact on the future.

Three of the experiences that I told above have taught me that leadership is a big responsibility, not a badge of honor. Leadership has to elevate the others by sharing the positive thoughts and energy to those around us. As a young leader, I have good achievement. Enriching new experiences and acquiring new knowledge and skills from Chevening Scholarship will move me forward to inspire young future Indonesian leaders.
bellachyntia   
Oct 18, 2017
Scholarship / Project Management Practicioner - Networking Chevening Essay [8]

@disneys

Dear Ayu,

Actually, I'm not an expert of this since I also need to write my essay for Chevening, but may be you find my information useful.

Your review has covered about networking and influence questions. Unfortunately, I don't get the point about your networking skill. It'll be great if you also mention the project you have done at your first paragraph. Another my suggestion is proudly mention what kind of your job you're doing. After finishing your essay, I don't even know what your job is.

Good luck!
bellachyntia   
Oct 18, 2017
Scholarship / "Leadership comes from within". Everyone is a leader in their own way. Chevening Essay [10]

Merged:

Leadership is not a badge of honor, but a big responsibility. CHEVENING ESSAY



Hey, I've revised my first essay for Chevening about Leadership & Influence.
Kindly appreciate your suggestions about my essay, including spelling and grammar errors.

Chevening is looking for individuals who will be future leaders or influencers in their home countries. Explain how you meet this requirement, using clear examples of your own leadership and influencing skills to support your answer.

(minimum word count: 100 words, maximum word count: 500 words)


Leadership is a competence that comes from within. One thing that sometimes people missed is they consider leadership as a position. Leadership is not a badge of honor, but a big responsibility. My leadership skill appeared when I joined a marching band team. Being a member of the team has taught me many valuable things for my personal growth. Because of having an ability to encourage one another to keep going and having problem-solving skill, therefore I had an opportunity to lead the marching band team.

As a band leader, I had a big dream for my team. Joining an international championship was one of my vision to teach my team about self-confidence and how to calm their fears in front of international stage. Unfortunately, my teachers and seniors felt pessimistic to join the championship. I took almost two weeks in convincing them by motivating them to dare to try the new things and not to be afraid to take a big step. At the end, we proved that we were able to get eight trophies for each category. The happiest thing that moment was not when we got the trophies, but when I succeeded to let my team felt what was the teamwork looked like when everyone on the team demonstrated their role flawlessly.

My influence skill has enhanced as time goes by. I also had an opportunity to lead a project to create an event introducing Thailand's culture. My team and I were successful to get many sponsors and media partners. I didn't ask them to do anything that I didn't do. Conversely, I led my team by giving them examples and the power of the teamwork made the event ran very well and exceeded our expectation.

Right now, I am working as a Corporate Marketing Communications that have responsibility to lead 16 hotels' Marketing Communications Officers under my brand's flagship from different cities. I need to create programs that fit with their all target markets. Knowing how to deliver the messages properly is an effective way to convince them to follow my programs. My career also urged me to have an ability of influencing upward. Sometimes I need to convince the Founder of the company about my ideas. I am not only engaging him to listen my ideas, but I also need to have the most important skill of listening. Being a strong communicator that communicating persuasively is an answer how my ideas can be accepted by my President Director.

The experiences have taught me that leadership should elevate the others by sharing the positive thoughts and energy to those around us. I believe that leadership is not only about leading the team, but also the ability to influence and to motivate the others to work together on doing the same thing. As a young leader, I have good achievements. Enriching new experiences and acquiring new knowledge and skills from Chevening Scholarship will move me forward to inspire young future Indonesian leaders. (495 words)
bellachyntia   
Oct 18, 2017
Scholarship / Chevening essay - My journey to becoming a leader [4]

Dear Christi,

I started leading a small weekly discussion group of the nurses.
Good essay, but it'll be great if you adjust your opening and closing statement.
bellachyntia   
Oct 20, 2017
Scholarship / "Leadership comes from within". Everyone is a leader in their own way. Chevening Essay [10]

Hey, I rewrite and rethink about my essay. Greatly appreciate if you could give me some feedback :D

LEADERSHIP & INFLUENCE ESSAY

Leadership is neither a matter of position nor a badge of honor. Leadership is a big responsibility. My first leadership experience was when I was appointed as a leader of a marching band team because I was deemed to have an ability to encourage one another to keep going and having problem-solving skill. Being on the team has taught me many valuable things. Therefore, I implement it today.

Based on experience that I got, leadership is not only about leading the team, but also the ability to influence & motivate the others to work together to achieve the shared goals. As a Corporate Marketing Communications Officer who has responsibility to lead 16 hotels' Marketing Communications Officers under my brand's flagship from different cities, I need to create programs that suit all their target markets. Knowing how to deliver the messages properly is an effective way to convince them to follow my programs.

Having the courage to take an initiative to make anything better is also the ability that leaders should have. After having many cancellations from guests because of fake travel warning about Mount Agung in Bali, we are trying to fully support government in creating awareness that Bali is still safe. My boss unpredictably showed me that he has edited video about Mount Agung that he got from Youtube without giving credit title to the creator. Consequently, I didn't agree with what he did. I suggested him to provide free stay voucher at our hotel in Bali and thus I can make a partnership with an online media to help us in creating big awareness. Being a strong communicator who can influence persuasively is the key how my ideas can be accepted by my President Director.

I believe that leadership should elevate the others by sharing the positive thoughts and energy to those around us. Nowadays, many bad publicities dominate headlines. Hence, I want to take a part to encourage people around me, especially the hoteliers and media friends, to utilize this digital era in creating a peaceful world by sharing good publicity about something. Gaining new experiences and acquiring new knowledge and skill from Chevening Scholarship will move me forward to find better solutions in terms of communications. (369 words)
bellachyntia   
Oct 25, 2017
Scholarship / Gaining Some Valuable Contacts and Information by Networking Skill - Chevening [5]

Hey, I greatly appreciate to get some feedback for you all :)

Chevening is looking for individuals with strong networking skills, who will engage with the Chevening community and influence and lead others in their chosen profession. Explain how you meet this requirement, using clear examples of your networking skills, and outline how you hope to use these skills in the future.

NETWORKING - improving Public Relations sector



Networking is not about passing out the business cards, but a matter of gaining some valuable contacts and information. I have built a strong network with media and blogger friends and still keep in touch with them until today. Conducting regular visit to their office or inviting them to have a lunch at my office are how I establish and maintain good relationship with them.

My networking effort with media and blogger friends has so many benefits. As one of the examples, I took an advantage of my connection with them to assist me inviting local journalists when I conducted a press conference in a different city from my office location. The local journalists not only did help me in creating awareness about my event in that city, but they also unpredictably wrote stories about me.

As a Corporate Marketing Communications Officer, I played a vital role to assist media and blogger friends in providing an information about 16 hotels under my brand's flagship. If they heard a bad issue about my hotel, they asked me to explain what actually happened. Instead of following to disseminate the bad issue, they helped me in grabbing people's attention by describing another great stories about my company. Because of keeping in a regular contact with media and blogger friends, I can turn a bad publicity about my company into the good one.

I grow my network by attending some gatherings and events. Interacting with a group of new people is how I can expand my network with key opinion leaders, travel and food bloggers, celebgrams, youtubers, travel agents, and governments. A few months ago, I created a blogger event and invited one of bloggers whom I met at the gathering event to join my program. He helped me in raising awareness about the event in their social media account. Moreover, he also helped me in promoting my current program to his friends for free.

Utilizing a social media is an effective way to build and grow strong relationship. I also develop my network connections from social media. Last month, Non Governmental Organization invited me to be a speaker to share my experiences in topic of understanding the performance of today's Public Relations via Linkedin. They said that I met their criteria and represented a young leader who stood out in the field. Unfortunately, I was unable to attend the event because I got involved in another event to launch my company's product. I am still maintaining good communication with them. Unpredictably, they still asked me to be the speaker for their next event on 2020.

For that reason, I want to make a contribution to be an agent of change. Upon returning home, I want to assist in improving Public Relations sector. An opportunity for strengthening relationship with Chevening Scholars and the academics from my chosen university will benefit me to find better solutions by gaining new knowledge and skills. Having connections with overseas students can also be used to make a collaboration in creating a project in communication sector that is dedicated for millenials generation. Sharing experiences and getting new perspectives from Chevening communities will open my mind about their different methods that may relevant to be implemented in my country.
bellachyntia   
Oct 30, 2017
Scholarship / Gaining Some Valuable Contacts and Information by Networking Skill - Chevening [5]

@Holt
Hey rose, thank you very much for your review. Hope you can give me some feedback for the revised again.

NETWORKING

Networking is not about passing out the business cards, but a matter of gaining some valuable contacts and information. I build a strong network with media and blogger friends and keep in touch with them until today. Conducting regular visit to their office or inviting them to have a lunch are the way I establish and maintain good relationship with them.

My networking effort with media and blogger friends has so many benefits. As an example, I took an advantage of my connection with them to assist me inviting local journalists when I held a press conference in a different city. The local journalists not only did help me in creating awareness about my event to public, but they also unpredictably wrote follow up stories about me that helped me in building up my professional profile.

Because of keeping in a regular contact with media and blogger friends, I could also turn a bad publicity about my company into the good one. If they heard a bad issue about my company, they asked me to explain what actually happened. Instead of following to disseminate the bad issue, they helped me in raising public attention of another great news about my company's kindness.

I enlarge my network by attending some gatherings and events. Interacting with a group of new people is how I can make contact with key opinion leaders, travel and food bloggers, celebgrams, youtubers, travel agents, and governments. A few months ago, I supported sales division to host a business lunch. I invited the bloggers whom I met at the gathering to attend the luncheon. He helped me in increasing awareness about the event in social media. Moreover, he also offered an assistance for my future project.

As a millenial generation, I utilize social media to develop new connections. Being active in Linkedin is an effective way to grow strong relationship with other professionals. Additionally, I was invited to be a speaker to share my experiences in topic of understanding the performance of today's Public Relations by a Non Governmental Organization in Jakarta. They said that I represented a young leader who stood out in the field. Unfortunately, I was unable to join them because I got involved in another event. Because of maintaining good communication, they still asked me to be the speaker for their next event on 2020.

For that reason, I want to make a contribution to be an agent of change. Upon returning home, I want to assist in improving Public Relations sector. An opportunity for strengthening positive relationships with Chevening Scholars and the academics from my chosen university will benefit me to find better solutions by gaining new knowledge and skills. Having connections with overseas students can also be used to make a collaboration in creating a project in communication sector that is dedicated to millenial generation. Sharing experiences and getting new perspectives from Chevening communities will open my mind about their different methods that may relevant to be implemented in my country.
bellachyntia   
Oct 30, 2017
Scholarship / "Leadership comes from within". Everyone is a leader in their own way. Chevening Essay [10]

@Holt
Hey holt, I wish I can get any reviews from your side regarding the revised below. Thank you

LEADERSHIP

Leadership is not only about leading the team, but also the ability to influence & motivate the others to work together to achieve the shared goals. My first leadership experience was when I became a Marketing Communications Apprentice at Fairmont Jakarta. As an apprentice, I was deemed to have the ability to easily adapt to a rapidly changing industry. Therefore, I was trusted to handle 10 restaurants on a digital platform named Zomato. I had an opportunity to train all Restaurant Managers. I influenced them to keep managing a good content on Zomato to increase awareness of the restaurants by providing a sample of content plan that I have executed and a case of Zomato's competitor that was successful utilizing the platform. Before my internship period ended, I succeeded to drive them to create their own strategy to operate their restaurants on Zomato.

Leadership is neither a matter of position nor a badge of honor. Leadership is a big responsibility. As a Corporate Marketing Communications Officer at Best Western Hotels & Resorts, I have a responsibility to lead 16 hotels' Marketing Communications Officers under my brand's flagship. I need to teach them to create promotional campaigns that suit all their target markets. Accordingly, I engaged them to use social media to promote their campaigns by giving a detail information and an example of a campaign on social media that I have made about Indonesia's Independence Day that has a huge impact. Shortly after, they implemented what I shared with them with their own campaign ideas and their General Manager thanked me because the effect was quite good. Knowing how to deliver the messages properly was an effective way to influence their mind and behavior.

I also need to have the courage to take an initiative to make anything better. After having many cancellations from guests because of fake travel warning about Mount Agung in Bali, we are trying to fully support the government in creating awareness to public that Bali is still safe. My boss unpredictably showed me that he had edited a video of Mount Agung that he got from YouTube without giving credit title to the creator. Consequently, I did not agree with what he did. I influenced him not to use the video and gave him clear explanation about bad impact for us in the future and instead used a professional one to made the video originally for the company. Being a strong communicator who can influence persuasively is the key how my ideas can be accepted by my President Director.

As a young leader, I have good achievement. Gaining new experiences and acquiring new knowledge and skills from Chevening Scholarship will move me forward to inspire another future Indonesian leaders. My leadership and influencing experiences will also be an asset for me to promote the Chevening scholarship program upon returning home.
bellachyntia   
Nov 1, 2017
Scholarship / Face the dynamic changes in communication sector by continuing my study in PR - CHEVENING [4]

Hey, please kindly give your review for my essay. Greatly appreciate your feedback :D

Outline why you have selected your chosen three university courses, and explain how this relates to your previous academic or professional experience and your plans for the future.

*Please do not duplicate the information you have entered on the work experience and education section of this form (minimum word count: 100 words, maximum word count: 500 words)


STUDYING IN THE UK QUESTION



I completed Bachelor of Communication with the Public Relations (PR) major from London School of Public Relations Jakarta. As top 30 students, I succeeded in passing International Qualification of Level 2 in PR with a score of 'Pass with Merit'. I also experienced tourism & hospitality industry as a Marketing Communication Apprentice at Fairmont Jakarta, while doing my thesis about state-owned oil & natural gas company and I finished both with great results. I did not only implement the theory of the course into real work practices, but I also gained new specific skills and experiences from the apprenticeship that were useful for my current job.

As a Corporate Marketing Communications at Best Western Indonesia, I need to execute different techniques to communicate to people from culturally diverse backgrounds with an aim to create mutual understanding and strong relationship. Therefore, I want to continue my study in PR course to obtain knowledge and skills from the world-leading university in UK which sufficiently allow me to face the dynamic changes in this growing sector. Moreover, UK offers an excellent post-graduate program that is generally shorter than in other countries which is an advantage for me who wish to study for a short period and return to home country with better solutions in a communication field.

My first choice is MA International Public Relations and Global Communication Management at Cardiff University. Ranked first in Guardian's University league table for PR, this university is also a partner of the Public Relations Consultants Association (PRCA) that can broaden my knowledge of PR and enhance my professional profile by attending valuable training courses. Besides that, the course is designed to develop my expertise at an international level that combines theory, practices, and advanced academic study. The modules will enrich my core management concept about global communications and digital communications.

I choose MA Corporate Communications, Marketing & Public Relations at University of Leeds as my second choice. Not only a part of Russel Group, Leeds also has triple accreditation from the three leading bodies in recognition of research and teacher excellence that will make an important contribution to my learning methods. The course offers a mix of theory, practice, and strategy that can provide essential foundations required as a professional PR. Additionally, I have an opportunity to attain new knowledge in the communication field by studying corporate communication, CSR and sustainability, brand management, and global marketing.

Thirdly, I decide to select MSc Public Relations at Metropolitan Manchester University. Being a partner of PRCA, the course is also approved by the Chartered Institute of Public Relations (CIPR) that enables me to become part of global associations in raising the good standard in the field. The course will benefit me in improving knowledge of modern practice by experiencing a unique blend of academic and practical skills, such as persuasive writing and PR specialism. Furthermore, I have a chance to handle live business projects for real clients that can enhance my additional career experience in future.
bellachyntia   
Nov 3, 2017
Scholarship / "TO LEAD IS TO INFLUENCE"...CHEVENING LEADERSHIP QUESTION [3]

@bilon
Dear bilon, your essay is good, but you need to give detail information about how your leadership and influence skill looks like. As a reader, I get your personal achievement essay instead of information about your leadership & influence skills.

Good luck
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