temiajare
Nov 15, 2020
Undergraduate / Well-balanced and fulfilling life - APPLICATION FOR UBC -- TELL US ABOUT WHO ARE [4]
Generally well written essay but I would advise a look at your sentence beginnings. Variety is the hallmark of a good writer and this is especially true in regards to sentence starts. Creatively arranging sentence beginnings breaks up the monotony and choppy style associated with a simple noun phrase followed by a verb.
Generally well written essay but I would advise a look at your sentence beginnings. Variety is the hallmark of a good writer and this is especially true in regards to sentence starts. Creatively arranging sentence beginnings breaks up the monotony and choppy style associated with a simple noun phrase followed by a verb.