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Nov 17, 2020
Writing Feedback / IELTS task 2 - How to evaluate a person? [4]
IELTS task 2, help me with my gramma and let me know what kind of vocabulary I can put it in.
This issue is a controversial on the affects the daily lives of everyone. People usually take one side over the other, despite not having any idea about the subject, But in my case I totally disagree a person's worth should be only judged by social status and material possessions. Here are the statement for my reasons below.
First of all, with reference to personality, the reason why I disagree with the title is that money and power can't represent a person's personality. Simply speaking, a man who is rich doesn't mean he is also a successful man or having a good character. For instance, a rich man can be rich may because he had born in a wealthy family and all he had was from his parents.
Second, honour, kindness and trust are way more important than social status and material possessions. If you date a guy who is a rich politician, but don't really care about your feeling and emotion. Obviously, he is not a good choice to married or have relationship. As a illustration, Lots of politicians had been reported on news that had been married again and again. Consequently, a person's worth shouldn't be judge by their social status and material possessions.
To sum up, I would state my opinion to this issue after analyzing the three reasons again. it it truly that we shouldn't only judge a person by their social status and material possessions. So, it is sagacious to support the statement that we should understand their personality first.
IELTS task 2, help me with my gramma and let me know what kind of vocabulary I can put it in.
a person's worth should be only judged by social status and material possessions
This issue is a controversial on the affects the daily lives of everyone. People usually take one side over the other, despite not having any idea about the subject, But in my case I totally disagree a person's worth should be only judged by social status and material possessions. Here are the statement for my reasons below.
First of all, with reference to personality, the reason why I disagree with the title is that money and power can't represent a person's personality. Simply speaking, a man who is rich doesn't mean he is also a successful man or having a good character. For instance, a rich man can be rich may because he had born in a wealthy family and all he had was from his parents.
Second, honour, kindness and trust are way more important than social status and material possessions. If you date a guy who is a rich politician, but don't really care about your feeling and emotion. Obviously, he is not a good choice to married or have relationship. As a illustration, Lots of politicians had been reported on news that had been married again and again. Consequently, a person's worth shouldn't be judge by their social status and material possessions.
To sum up, I would state my opinion to this issue after analyzing the three reasons again. it it truly that we shouldn't only judge a person by their social status and material possessions. So, it is sagacious to support the statement that we should understand their personality first.
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