Writing Feedback / Task 1: the percentage of UK population following the radio and television (October-December 1992) [4]

Uk dwellers and media

The line graph demonstrates the percentage of UK population who are aged 4 years old following the radio and televison during the octorber - december period in 1992

The figure illustrates the proportion of United Kingdom dwellers who are aged over 4 years old watching radio and broadcast media such as television throughout between October and December over a period of 1992 . Overall, it is noticed that there were mixed results of time about the change in how much time did childrens upper 4 years old follow radio and television , there was fluctuation significantly in the ratio of UK teenagers who watch television while the radio was a remarkable decrease from october to december.

Obviously, It is clearly seen that between 6:00 AM and 6:00 PM , people in UK were tend to follow television fluctuate and then reached a peak in 6:00 PM at upper a half , nearly doubling that of radio at 35% people who pay attention to and there was increase considerably occupies 25% at 6:00 PM , decline at 10% over 13 hours in 1992.

Apparently, in midnight , teenagers in United Kingdom were not toward radio attracted substantially and just remained stable between 8:00 PM and 6:00 AM and higher than the number of adolescent who pay attention to television the duration time and there was a rapidly decrease at 5%.

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Writing Feedback / Task 2: positives or not about computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper [2]

There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home.
This is because computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper .

Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Currently, technology civilization is developing significantly day by day , there are a lots of modern devices such as computer technology which is one of the most equipment can both access fastly and inexpensive . The majority of employees regularly tend to work in their own house . Moreover, there are still a number of students who are not learning at school . My belief is that the disadvantages of this matter outweigh its advantages.

One primary negative of working and studying by modern technology is productive completely target not highly efficient although we have a lot of times to work and study but nobody control particular a part of homework regularly , they just check throughout the laptop or other broadcast media without knowing if their students or employers are cheating or not . On the other hand, computers have a lot of websites to entertain and relax such as youtube, facebook, tiktok and so on . Generally , they might not concentrate on their purpose by the destruction of broadcast media. This is a major issue why they work without qualification . According to the hypothesis, most students are learning by computer, laptop or even smartphone. They regularly tend to do other things such as listen to music , watch films on Netflix more than listen to the teacher teach the lesson .

Secondly, the important relationships individual will not be able to expand and closer either classmates or co-workers without they go to school and office and then this is a complicated issues and hard to deal with if you not maintain and develop tight-knit relationships and then a lot of conflicts will set up by one of your co-workers because you do not pleasant them although just a small mistake such as accidentally spilled water and they definitely think that you deliberate , so it is really dangerous issues if you just work in your own accomodation without you do add and interact with other relationship in either work environment or study environment.

In conclusion, working and studying by modern technology is productive and not highly efficient . Moreover, the important relationships individual will not be able to expand and close either classmates or co- worker . Personally , I definitely use broadcast media for more pros than cons.