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Posts by minahaya2020 [Suspended]
Name: Mina Hayata
Joined: Mar 13, 2022
Last Post: Mar 25, 2022
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From: Vietnam
School: Foreign Trade University

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minahaya2020   
Mar 13, 2022
Writing Feedback / IS FREEDOM OF SPEECH NECESSARY IN A FREE SOCIETY. TO WHAT EXTEND DO YOU AGREE ? (250 words minimum) [2]

freedom of speech essay



There is one famous saying by George Orwell : " If liberty means anything at all, it means the right to say what they do not want to hear" , which I completely agree with and I suppose the freedom of speech is necessary in an open society.

Human beings are those who have the emotions and the demand to share to one another. I believe that free of speech give chance for everyone the right to talk anything they would like in public as: newspapers. television channel, internet,.. Obviously, once people feel at ease to analyze the current affairs openly with friends, families, so people are satisfied with not refraining inside their heart the thoughts which may lead them to the tension and depression.

As long as people are encouraged to point out and report the crime and disseminate it widespread into community, many senseless activities may by prevented ahead . Inevitably, this activity needs a high consistency and firm determination from the reporter. Although the crime declaration is unable to help decreasing the criminal ratio thoroughly ,it contribute to people the bravery, resilience and gives them the courage to overcome the common fear.

Moreover, I think that a free society should have the compatible regulation on the freedom of speech to identify whether a speech is right or wrong on ethical standard. There is likelihood that some people autonomously declare fake news to deteriorate others' reputation . The misinformation may bring the devastating effect to ruin one's fame and may cause them the suicide.

In conclusion, freedom of speech is essential for all democratic authority which helps developing a transparent and justice-oriented society that all people ever dream of.
minahaya2020   
Mar 23, 2022
Writing Feedback / Writing Task2: The advantages and disadvantage of children's horticulture and livestock activities [4]

In the first body paragraph, there are exaggeration on drawbacks. I read and sometimes I imagine the drawbacks outnumber the benefits. If I write this topic, I will give minor drawbacks with a solution. Then in the second body paragraph, you write the benefits to clarify your opinion. Then you can prove that BENEFITS OUTNUMBER THE DRAWBACKS.
minahaya2020   
Mar 24, 2022
Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 2 TOPIC: GOVERNMENT AND SOCIETY [4]

Hello, I think you didn't explain "the most important" aspect of economy, should focus on that. Then should have a post signing to support for idea "other sector is important too".
minahaya2020   
Mar 24, 2022
Writing Feedback / Task 2 : NOWADAYS ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE IS BEING USED TO DRIVE CAR. [2]

Full topic:
Nowadays artificial intelligence is being used to drive car.

Why is it happening ? Is it positive or negative development ?



Nowadays it is very often to see the advertisement of automobile's self-navigating system everywhere. Obviously, people shift to habit of automatic car driving gradually under assistance of artificial intelligence. This is a positive development that technology accomplishments contribute to daily life.

We are living in an era which humans witness remarkable achievements on technology or computer science. It is true that all these advantages bring many benefits and one of these is using artificial intelligence in car driving. Majority of us find troublesome in driving our own cars everyday due to various distractions ,so we need a solution for this matter. Artificial intelligence is developed to tackle this question by integrating with the automobile's navigating system to give instructions to drivers. We take Tesla car as an example: driver gives order by voice or input by hands to the system the details of destination, then the system automatically figure out the route and give directions to driver. Hence, we will not fear or confuse whenever we start driving car anymore.

In addition, Utilizing artificial intelligence in driving car is a positive improvement because it helps to predict the possible circumstances as: congestion area, traffic accidents or peak time . According to recent researches, there is a significant decrease on accidents on road after numerous automobile company started applying the artificial intelligence to control the driving process. Therefore, it is advisable that artificial intelligence technology should be an unseparated part of the automobile globally.

In general, we ought to popularize the application of artificial intelligence in car driving to public in order that everyone understands the its benefits and accept to use it universally, and we educate the young generation to innovate the artificial intelligence to be far better in future.
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