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irs055   
Mar 24, 2011
Writing Feedback / "Important truths begin as outrageous, or at least uncomfortable..." [2]

"Important truths begin as outrageous, or at least uncomfortable, attacks upon the accepted wisdom of the time."

The nature of human beings perception varries from person to person.Poeple tends to think ,accept it when they meet consenses of mind.Some accept or deny the facts proved .Somme may require more elloberate ways to proove and others may require a cleric approach for the same.

Clearly from the past ,numerous theories have been devoleped by famous scientist based on their experiment and observation ,they we subjected to even hostile measures when they approached ordinary folks.The poeple were never willing to accept some these inventions suddenly because they me feel its against their belief or customs .For ex a misconseption regarding the earth was prevailed in olden days. when poeple started to move towards the sea they felt that the beleif that earth is round may be proove wrong.They were obssesed with the fact that was thought in their mind and not willing to change the perception .But later poeple were forced to accept the truth ,earth was never a flat one .

As we can see the approach to truths becomes outrageous first as it is the nature of human beings to negate a truth.

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irs055   
May 16, 2011
Writing Feedback / Law need a flexiblity in approach considering the situation, place and time [4]

"Laws should not be rigid or fixed. Instead, they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places."

Laws are created to meet the injustice and find the guilty.These are written documents and enacted once the judicial procedure approves.Every aspects of life including social,economical ,technical and even international follows these laws.If one can make law flexible and rigid accordingly to their on wish it does not meet the objective of the law.People need justice and it fulfill the thirst of the people.

The process of enactment of law varies from country to country.The incidence like Bhopal Gas Tragedy in India and the Chernobyl in Russia ,which world witnessed in recent years has been an examples to those whose victims never got justice till now.Even though there has been huge destruction of life ,infrastructure and environment.The question lies whether the guilty had been punished or not.The victims are still facing the deep disgrace of government and even the compensation they get is very less.

Considering this circumstances the people need justice for their survival .The law can be flexible to meet this injustice.

A recent law had been formulated regarding the saving life in case of any who has met with an accident .Strangers can save the life any one who met an accident in road...Earlier a police complaint had to filled before getting admitted to hospital .As the law makers found saving life is a priority and right of doctors than the report filling by the police ,This flexible holds strong the nature of intimacy of humankind .

Recent movement against corruption in India has witnessed for a failure in law enactment.The corrupted politician's still rule ,once they have been charged for it .The crime has been increased and the intensity of crimes is also at the peak level.The guilty will get a maximum of life term if he kills 1 or 10.The severity of law has a limit .So time has come to change the law for the flexible approach.

As the law need a flexiblity in approach considering the situation, place and time .This flexibilty can cater the hasty enactment and speedy execution providing justice.
irs055   
May 17, 2011
Undergraduate / Temple-essay 2: personal development, about myself. [4]

Please include your motivations and what you prefer to do after ur graduation.

also describe your work in some more sentences including your experiences ,and exposure ..
irs055   
May 17, 2011
Writing Feedback / "It is an individual who is the impetus for innovation; the details may be teamwork" [3]

"It is always an individual who is the impetus for innovation; the details may be worked out by a team, but true innovation results from the enterprise and unique perception of an individual."

Every aspects of life requires innovation for optimization and stability for a a better leaving for tomorrow. World has witnessed a notable change in all fields,productive to humankind . Necessity is the mother of invention .Man's desperate need for a solution that can be a temperorery or permanent ,is the motive behind the innovation.There are lot of revolutionary scientist's whose thinking had led today a world of technological and economical progress.Here the real credit goes to individual whose inception in forming ideas in his mind is accountable.

This was evident from history when Copernicus postulated by his perspective regarding the solar system.He Predicted and founded that "sun is the center of earth and all the planets revolve around it".As time progressed his thinking got a new era in the astronomical studies .Though Copernicus individuality is never taken into account ,but the contribution from an individual is remarkable and its the real impetus towards the latest revolutionary in astronomical studies.

Individuals outdo team in certain works in implementing .The revolution for example in the field of milk,silk...are examples where an individual research had a great effect in the development of the country.The recent revolutions in Egypt,Syria and Lybia are due to the concerns from certain individual who makes other motivated to struggle.

The freedom struggle for any country may be effort by the will be a team effort ,but the real man who motivated these struggle are represented as icons of history.The "Appathied " movement in South Africa was led by led by Nelson Mandela against the rulers for neglecting the blacks and oppressing them.Huge research projects are undergoing in labs are the result of individual thinking in respective field .As today technological advanced era poeple patent their work for taking them to research.

Today ,there is recognition in individual works ,providing them accolades and awards for their commitment and hardwork.The goverment support them financially and ensure their work is notified and bring into effect from numerous effort from team members. For a perfect execution of any project or any kind of revolt there should be a high indulgence and cooperation between the individual and team .Are we today considering the individual behind every innovation?.
irs055   
May 18, 2011
Writing Feedback / "The function of science is to reassure; the purpose of art is to upset. Therein lies [8]

"The function of science is to reassure; the purpose of art is to upset. Therein lies the value of each."

The relation between science and art is diverging in recent times.The natural proclivity towards science is the primary reason for the domination of science over art.

Generally the approach towards science is a common phenomena and as is inspired from generations.The purpose of science can meet a concrete and a firm reasoning towards the general accepted belief.It can reassure the facts and objectives necessary for the sustainablity of knowledge and passing it over to generations.The significance of art is limited in the case of its negligible recepients and the awareness of art in common people .Some arts and the concerned works becomes esoteric ,Primarly to meet the ideologies of some preeminent persons.Art has got an unique charracterisation of ideas and the preference to art is limitted to certain people.

The general approach to find a solution is to understand the theoretical and practical aspects of a subject .This can be only possible in considering a science as an option.Numerous reserach in the field of medical geographical ,political and economical is the clear evidence science being preferred for the sustenance and better living for tomorrow.The science subjects dwell deep into the subjects ,find the relevant facts ,work on it,cogitate new solutions and observations primarily to help the humankind to save and preserve the earth as safe place to live.

The domination of science over arts is seen at the primary level in schools and colleges .Parents prefer their children to opt science subjects than over arts in choosing their careers .It's because the natural tendency that profile bearing a science can offer them fair earning and descent life for future .This trend is growing in countries like India where the number of intake is less in case of applicants .The graduates confer high demanding job once they emerge from their respective colleges.The growing opportunities in science have a reassuring effect in case of these profesionals .The inter-relations between countries and technology transfer,and global approach of countries to provide a unified approach makes assure them a brightness in future.

The purpose of art is said to upset because of its comparision towards science yield an unnatural response.The general trend toward art is in its complexity and its implied agenda can be only understood by a few intellectuals followed by followers.The employ opportunities for art candidates is not attractive and lucrative compared to science graduates.Recent methologies are trying to make art a more attractive and preferable .During economic depression the trend is likely to made a shift in choosing a lucrative carrier over inherent choice and talent of a particular candidates.

The value of art is clear from its contribution towards the devolepment of creating a human beings more humble and generous.The works from history teaches humankind to be a better social animal .The impact on revoulutions and the emergence of artist,politicians and ideoligies made us to learn from the past incidents.

Lastly,Science and art are sides of a coin.It has got negetive and positve implications on coming to the practical side and it has to be in balance for a well functioning of our world.
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