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vuducnam   
Jun 16, 2011
Writing Feedback / Most criminals are set free once they finished their jail term. [3]

Most criminals are set free once they finished their jail term.Is the re-introduction of criminal in societies is justifield?
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Nowadays, crime is one of many significant issues in our society. In the reality, criminals are free after finishing their jail terms. However, the re-introduction of criminals should be justified. In my point of view, the whole society should give criminals chances to start their lives one more time.

Firstly, putting them in to jail is a punishment used to make criminals regret for their sins . A jail term is given to the criminal after cautious a fair trial. Also this is the indicator of what the criminal deserves. Nevertheless, the purpose of jail term is not only to make the criminal realize their mistakes but also to help them improve. Many rehabilitation programmes are carried out during the jail term. Also, the criminals will learn lots of useful skills when returning to normal life . It is the society the place that a normal human always belong to.

Still, in the reality, it is not that easy for criminals ending their jail terms to get back to their normal lives. Many of them may not be accepted by many people. As the result, they will face lots of obstacles. This could lead to the consequence that they might think in a risky way such as returning their old ways (being a criminal again). The situation can be worse when they once again become a bigger threat to society.

Thus, for me I would provide them opportunities to mend their lives in positive and better ways. If we have discriminations towards them, they can become depressed and lacked of faith in their lives. This can lead them to become criminals another time. Hence, despite lots of hardships they will encounter, people should have sympathy to them, so that they can believe in themselves. "Everyone deserves a second chance".
vuducnam   
Jun 19, 2011
Writing Feedback / Some people believe that only pupils of similar interests should be given admissions [3]

Nowadays,governments around the world are supporting comprehensive education,but some people want to buid schools where only pupils of similar interests should be given admissions.In my opinion there are two side to every matter,therefore a child's education must be carefully considered.

No one can deny the benefits of group pupils with similar interests.It makes them become a homogeneous mass which means they will equal in knowledge to a certain extent,therefore teachers and mentors will find it easy to plan the training and course ware for pupils.At the same time,competition in class will be sharper and their skills will be highly polished because pupils will not wasting time and energy into other objects.To illustrate : In some sport school,children just training in only one sport what they have talent,that makes them more profession and soon become an athletes.

However,if all children in a class alike,if they share the same thoughts and the same abilities,they will not learn to appreciate and respect people with other interests.They will also no know how to tolerate people with different point of view.Thus they will lack the ability to understand other people.Moreover the environment will be monotonous and boring so sometime pupils will feel depressed.Furthermore,unlike high-school and college students,children throughout elementary and middle school should be show the way of learning properly.

Inconclusive,not only will learning in a class of identical individuals not favor development but many pupils are still young and need a supportive learning environment for a proper mental and physically development.
vuducnam   
Jun 22, 2011
Undergraduate / Do you think that advertising encourages people to buy things that they don't want ? [2]

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Do you think that advertising encourages people to buy things that they don't want ?

Nowadays,when people live in the era of advertisement,they can see advertising anytime,anywhere with high frequency what has a major impact on consumers in both side negative and positive.

Firstly,advertisers want to encourage consumers buying new products even what they do not really need.For example : Advertising about nutrition food,the consumer believe that with product they bought,it makes them get what they want.In fact almost nutrition makes users angry because it is not like what the advertisement said,such as diet medicine users think drinking it will help them lose their weight while they do not care about their diet.That is a big mistake of consumers when they believe in the advertising.Moreover,some kind of advertising about fast food related to the issue of obesity in children.

On the on the hand,there is no denying the benefits of advertising.With a wide range of advertisements about different produces,consumers can compare products or get more information related the product.The advertiser bring to users a widely choice and more opportunities to access new products with new technology or more friendly with environment.It makes user's life become easier.

To sum up,everything have two face,be a smart consumer has solid stand before the information highway.Users must consider carefully before give a decision to buy something.Meanwhile they should no completely believe in advertisers
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