Writing Feedback / IELTS - school or parents have equal nurturing on students [NEW]

It has been controversial issue, which of these have more influence on behaviour of children; parents or school. However, in my estimate, they have probably same strength of impact on children's attitude and their future lifestyle.

As a baby was born, he is embraced by his parents' care and attention. They train infant basic movements such as walking and running and moreover, force him to talk some easy word s and sentences. Beside these, parent's have strong affect on a child how they behave in social life. Parents educate child how to act in a polite way and be a strong personality. Surely,as psychology says these short amount of years have crucial effect on child's future life and his attitude toward people.

Immediately after child enters school life he is encompassed unknown people and place for him. Here it will be the first time to show his manner that has been instructed by parents. In addition, school will strengthen his character and will add some new skills.Being in a society at school he will get acquainted with new people indepently and that will ,undoubtedly, help him to socialize and make improvement in his attitude. Thaught skills such as reading,comprehension and analyzing are so irreplaceble that no one and no place could teach it in his whole life. By these skills he could bring up himself individually.

All in all, although it is compared which school or parents have more impact ,in my observation, they have equal nurturing on student's ,whether they will be good member of society or not.

Writing Feedback / Having less number of friends or more friends? Which is better? [5]

some people prefer to spend time with one or two close friends. Other choose to spend time with a large number of friends. Compare the advantages of each choise. Which of these two ways of spending time do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer.

All mankind need someone to spend their time with and share some thoughts and interest. The people we feel very close to is our friends. But the issue is which has more advantages: few close friends or a vast number of friends. In my opinion, more friends bring more gain than few friends.

Firstly, more friends bring lots of interests with themselves. Variety of interests affects joyfulness and our world outlook. As our circle of friendship broadening, we have more chance to be introduced to diverse kind of entertainment and science. For example, one of my friends is an avid music listener. She always provides me with a various kind of music genres which is fun a lot. Another friend who is a keen learner of wildlife, always talks about plant and animals which he read in books or watched on television. All of that undoubtedly, colour my life and bring happiness.

Moreover,having wide numbers of friends means an easy way to help each other when we are in need. Undoubtedly, aiding each other causes mutual advantages. If we have some request to do, we could easily choose one among friends who better suits to help us. By that way, we are more likely to avoid troubles and figure out problems in an easy way. Besides, if one of our friends has faced some kind of difficulty, by solving it we get enough experience for a particular problem. That surely, makes us wise and strong personality.

To put in a nutshell, I feel that owing to more friends we get range of interests and mutual assistance. As it is always said, "The more, the merrier".