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Dec 26, 2012
Undergraduate / Business and Management/ NYU Supp/ Programs & Interests? [5]
Essay question: NYU's global network provides students with hundreds of academic areas of interest for students to cultivate their intellectual curiosity and to help achieve their career goals. Whether you are entirely undecided about your academic plans or you have a definitive program of study in mind, what are your own academic interests? Feel free to share any thoughts on any particular programs or how you might explore those interests at NYU on any of our campuses.
I strongly desire to study business and management in New York University's Leonard N. Stern School of Business to be a global businessman. Even though South Korea is a small country, it is known to be one of the most powerful economic countries throughout the world. The chairman, Lee Kun Hee of Samsung Electronics, which the representative company in South Korea said that business is an art, thus businessman needs be prepared with talents and capabilities to be the artist. New York as the hub of global economy and NYU as the central university in the state, I hope to gradually develop myself to become an ambitious businessman. For this, I believe that it is necessary to take a first step to inure my fundamental knowledge in core subjects. This leads me to the field of Liberal Studies - Global Liberal Studies in NYU. As I am preparing to grow myself as an international businessman, I am very excited to learn a fourth language in the Global Liberal Studies. As it's goal is to provide best possible foundations and to direct them to their suitable undergraduate schools, I am confident to claim that Global Liberal Studies is the right choice for my future career interests. In addition, this program offers studying abroad opportunities, so it would give me a variety in receiving high quality education from NYU.
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Essay question: NYU's global network provides students with hundreds of academic areas of interest for students to cultivate their intellectual curiosity and to help achieve their career goals. Whether you are entirely undecided about your academic plans or you have a definitive program of study in mind, what are your own academic interests? Feel free to share any thoughts on any particular programs or how you might explore those interests at NYU on any of our campuses.
I strongly desire to study business and management in New York University's Leonard N. Stern School of Business to be a global businessman. Even though South Korea is a small country, it is known to be one of the most powerful economic countries throughout the world. The chairman, Lee Kun Hee of Samsung Electronics, which the representative company in South Korea said that business is an art, thus businessman needs be prepared with talents and capabilities to be the artist. New York as the hub of global economy and NYU as the central university in the state, I hope to gradually develop myself to become an ambitious businessman. For this, I believe that it is necessary to take a first step to inure my fundamental knowledge in core subjects. This leads me to the field of Liberal Studies - Global Liberal Studies in NYU. As I am preparing to grow myself as an international businessman, I am very excited to learn a fourth language in the Global Liberal Studies. As it's goal is to provide best possible foundations and to direct them to their suitable undergraduate schools, I am confident to claim that Global Liberal Studies is the right choice for my future career interests. In addition, this program offers studying abroad opportunities, so it would give me a variety in receiving high quality education from NYU.
Please help me to find grammar mistakes and titivate contents.!!!
I don't have anyone around me to help reading my essay since the supporting hand in my place is limited.
Thank you all