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Enid

Jul 23, 2013

Enid

Jul 24, 2013

Writing Feedback / Some people are of the opinion that looking back the past is waste of time [4]

Hi I don't know how to edit your text so that the corrections are evident for you.This one I am just checking whether I am doing it correctly.If so, I will post another one.If not, please ignore this.

Some people are of the opinion that looking back the past is wasteful of time in today's society, while others claim that studying history are of great benefits for human, especially children.

Enid

Jul 24, 2013

Writing Feedback / Some people are of the opinion that looking back the past is waste of time [4]

Hi, Sorry about that.Here is the properly corrected answer.

To some pp, studying the past has little value in the modern world. Why do you think it is important to do so? What will be the effect if children are not taught history? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Enid

Jul 24, 2013

Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 1; % of money spent on food, drinks & tobacco by people in Europe [5]

The table summarises the percentage of money spent on three different items,by people in five European countries,in 2002.

Turkey spent the highest amount (32.14%)on food ,drinks and tobacco and this is more than twice as the amount spen by Sweden (15.77%).Ireland spent 28.91% whereas the expenditures were much less in Spain (18.8%) and Italy ( 16.36%)

In contrast to a lesser expenditure on food,drinks and tobacco,Spain paid a big amount for clothing (9%).All the other countries paid almost similar percentage on clothing and food,around 6%.

Turkey was the highest spending country on leisure and education too, and the figure was 4.35%.Italy and Sweden had very close percentages 3.20 and 3.22 respectively.Spain ( 1.98%) was the least spending country for liesure and education and was lesser than the half of Turkey's expenditure.

To sum up,out of five countries Turkey spent the highest amount on food,drinks and tobacco as well as on education and leisure.Italians spent mre money on clothing and foot ware.

Thank you
I could not attach the table.

Enid

Aug 6, 2013

Writing Feedback / ILETS: Should children be never educated at home? 'Coaching a little angel' [4]

They maintain that the teachers could not provide individual attention to their boys or girls to the extent they do, as classes size have increased unprecedentedly.

My cousin , who was initially coached by her parents, awarded as the best student when heshe attended the high school later.

Hi,

To my knowledge your essay is excellent.Keep it up.
Good Luck

Enid

Aug 6, 2013

Writing Feedback / IELTS Task 1 - The pie charts below give information about world population .... [3]

The pie charts below give information about world population in 1900 and 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

The two pie charts summarise the data on population distribution in the world in 1900 and 2000.

In 1900, the total population was 1.6 billion and 60% of this population lived in Asia.Europe including the Russia was the home for 25% of people in the world.North America ,Latin America and Africa all had a very smaal percentage of people ( 5%, 3% and 4% respectively).Only 3% of people lived in other areas of the world.

The world population increased upto 6 billion by year 2000, and there were striking differences to the worldwide distribution.Although Asia ,having 54% , was still the region with highest percntage of people, it was dropped by 4%.The percentage of people living in Europe ( 14% ) also decreased significantly by 9%. By contrast, the percentages for Africa increased, more than double, from 4% to 10 % and for Latin America this was nearly trippled ( from 3% to 8%).In addition there was a new region, Middle East and North Africa, with 6% of the population. However North America's percentage remained unchange.

Overall, during the period of study, there was a significant increase in the number of people living in the planet.Although Asia and Europe were still the residence for a large proportion of people, the population growth has occured mainly in other regions.

Please help!!
Thank You.

( Itried to attch the chart but couldn't.Please tell me how to do it.)