Writing Feedback / The rate of students who passed major examination in high school [5]

The bar chart below shows the percentage of students who passed their high school competency exams, by subject and gender, during the period 2010-2011.

This bar chart illustrates the percentage of students who passed major examination in high school that divided by gender between 2010 and 2011. Overall, it is important to note that females who passed the exam was dominated in this rate. The percentage of computer science was dominated females, whereas geography is the favorite lesson for males.

Moving to a more detailed analysis, the highest proportion in this rate was experienced by women in computer science by 56.3% compared by men at 42.1%. Subsequently, the most favorite lesson by males that mathematics at 48.4% but the percentage of women more higher than men, which reached a through 1.2%. Moreover , the females released the proportion at more than 35% and the men's proportion shown a reverse. Interestingly, the another science lesson was also popular by women, there was approximately twofold more slight men and witnessed the least number at 14.1%.

Turning to the social sciences, the geography was the most popular lesson for men. There was reached 30.4% and the women saw two-third from the percentage of men. However, the number of history lesson was experienced a through 2.7% more better females. Whilst foreign languages also showed high percentage in this rate, both of females and males witnessed less than a half proportion.

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Writing Feedback / Global expenditure in several basic needs and Global resource consumptions [NEW]

The pie charts below show World Spending, World population and Consumption of Resources.

The pie charts illustrate Global population, global expenditure in several basic needs and Global resource consumptions. Overall, it can be seen that the majority of world people lives in Asia. In this case, food is the largest percentage of their expenditure, while more than half of the resources are consumed by USA and European people.

To begin, people of the world spent 24% and 18% of their expenditure on food and transport respectively. Following this, the percentage for housing is 12% while a half of it is represented by clothing. In addition, more than half of the world populations live in Asia continent while both Europe and America have only 14% of the total population.

Next, one in ten of the world population live in Africa and rest of the 5% people live in other regions of the world. Turning to consumption of resources, 60% of global resources are consumed by USA and Europe people and 40% of its rest is used by people living in other regions of the world.

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Writing Feedback / Several kinds of fuel consumed by American citizens [2]

The graph below gives information from Annual Energy Outlook 2008 about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030

The line chart illustrates the changes of several kinds of fuel consumed by American citizens per year from 1980 to 2030 as a projected year, a 50-year period and is measured in quadrillion units. Overall, it can be seen clearly that energy produced from petrol or oil was by far the largest consumption over the period. Next, the use of non-renewable energy was more dominant than renewable energy.

To begin with renewable energy, the use of energy generated from petrol and oil stood at 35 in 1980 and fluctuated until 1998. Subsequently, it increased significantly to 40 in 2005 and was predicted to finish at 50 in the end of period. The figure for natural gas and coal showed almost a similar trend to the former. The consumption of energy derived from natural gas fell to around 17 in 1985 but during the following six year, this rose dramatically to 25. Afterward, it will remain stable until 2030. By contrast, energy used from solar/wind was forecast to incline considerably over the same period in which it climbed by 16 from 1980 to 2030.

Turning to non-renewable energy, the number of energy from nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower consumed was equal at 3 in the early period. While the energy from hydropower and solar/wind will be unchanged throughout the time period, nuclear experienced a slight rise and will continue to went up until 2030.

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Writing Feedback / Housing, food, health care, education, transportation and other needs in a country [2]

The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010

A breakdown of the proportion of the expenses made in housing, food, health care, education, transportation and other needs in a country between 1950 to 2010 is illustrated in the bar charts. Overall, it is important to note that the proportion of consuming food dominated in 2010. While the highest expenditure was experienced by housing, the percentage of health care showed a reverse in 1950.

Moving to a more detailed analysis, the proportion of housing expenditure showed at 72.1% in 1950. The second most expenditure in this country was in consuming food. All other expenditures including health care, education, transportation, and other needs were less than 20% in total.

However, people's expenditure in housing decreased to only 22% while the expenditure for food increased to 34%. Interestingly the expenditure on education decreased over time while the expenses for transportation increased to 14%. All other expenditure in 1950 was only 4.4% which increased to 19.2% in 2010.

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Writing Feedback / The number of travellers visited New York City through three main US airports [2]

The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.

A breakdown of the number of passengers visited New York City through three main airports over a six-year period during 1995 to 2000 and is measured by million. Overall, it is important to note that LaGuardia and Newark airport saw upwards trend, when LaGuardia airport was the most popular at the end rate. Next, there was a fluctuanted pattern in the number of passengers who travelled via John F. Kennedy airport.

Moving to a more detailed analysis, LaGuardia proportion stood at 35m in 1995, after that, there rose gradually for the next three years, at 46m. In 2000, the figure for passengers LaGuardia airport reached the peak point at 68m travellers. In Newark airport, it began at the lowest point of 16m passengers in the first year. Subsequently, the trend increased significantly to 42m in 1998. In the last two years it remained stable at 42m travellers.

Turning to the number of travellers at John F. Kennedy airport started at 26m in 1995, while increased rapidly to reach the highest point of 47m in 1997. In 1999, the figure for passengers was a minimal decrease to 32m. At the last period, there was a slight growth to 44m .

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Writing Feedback / The percentage of unemployment rates among women in several countries of the United Kingdom [3]

The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.

A breakdown of the percentage of unemployment rates among women in several countries of the United Kingdom between 2013 and 2014 is illustrated in the bar chart. Overall, it is important to note that decreased female unemployment rate, except in Scotland. The highest number was released by Scottish in 2014, while the proportion in Northern Ireland showed a reverse.

Moving to a more detailed analysis, England had the greatest percentage of unemployed women in 2013 at 6.8%. However, there decreased by 0.3% in 2014. Interestingly, Scotland was the only country which had an increasing percentage of unemployed women. In 2013, it had 6.1% of women out of work. Afterwards, there increased to 6.7% women in 2014.

In 2013, 5.6% of Irish were unemployed. Following by the percentage of women unemployed experienced in Wales at 5.4% . Both countries saw a decrease in the percentage of unemployed women in 2014. In Northern Ireland, the percentage fell to 4.6% and in Wales it hit a through 5%.

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