Writing Feedback / TOEFL practice 1 - sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries [2]

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At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support

Some people claim that the university and colleges should spend more financial support at classes and libraries to renew the last expensive technics and books. However, although it is important to give students a great study environment, helping students develop socially is as important as well. Furthermore there are many benefits which sports and social activities lead to strengthen both physical and psychological side for every students.

Playing sports and joining in social activities are both good ways for students to release their stress. After concentrating on doing something for long time and don't get an expecting results, we will feel tired and frustrated. The pressure will press us in a blue mood, in this time playing some sports or join in social activities would be a well suggestion.

As more as more companies take importance in not only how well student's academic background knowledge are but also looking for well social interaction and know how to cope with stress in a proper way. So the universities an colleges should help students to develop the sociability in their learning stage. Joining a sport team or social activity may help students experience how to working as a team instead of individually. In this process students may learn to take care of others thoughts, the social skills, and team's spirit and also find the self-identity, all of them may prove very important in building a career.

As above proving that sports and social activities is important as classes and libraries. Before achieving a great milestone in the academic researching, a good social skills and well dealing with stress have been one's personality traits. What I believe that universities and colleges should spend adequate financial support in academic and social side. For instance, it should build the sport court, budget planning for buying the necessary equipment, and also distribute the scholarship for encouraging well performance.

For these reasons, I maintain that universities and colleges should spend adequate financial support in both academic education and social movements helping students develop their future.

Writing Feedback / Always telling the truth is the most consideration in any relationship between people? [4]

Some people claim that in order to maintain relationship between people, we always have to tell the truth. However, every person is individual, we can't find second person who has totally the same behavior and personality's traits as you did. Somethings you think it is right, but others don't. In this situation, being an honest person all the time is the main factor to firmly connect the relationship? My answer is properly not.

Telling the truth is the important consideration in any relationship between people. Before building a relationship in each other, being an honest person is the first step to let others know that you are the person who can rely on. Then people will comes close to you, telling their feeling, asking for your suggestions, or even entrusting the private belongings to you. These are all because you are the person we trust.

The report shows that most people will list honest to be the quality they want in a partner. Unfortunately, most people have had an experience of being lied to. Prevent from hearting our friend's confidence and mood, we will choose to tell a white lie. For example, my friend has just bake a glorious apple pie. After taking a bite, it is not as tasty as it look like. Actually, I think it is disgusting. But to concern of my friend's feeling, I won't just tell her what I truly think. Instead I will properly say it taste well but something can be improved.

Always telling the truth means that you are one hundred percent open. There are not any privacy left, and obviously people will not let it happen. For most people, being a trust person is as important as preserving the privacy. Therefore, we will make a balance between getting hurt or hurting our partner's feeling, and select the adequate way to keep the relationship.

In the conclusion, honesty isn't just a behavior, it is a way of life. Communicating truthful and heartful will indeed strengthen our relationship. However I think 'always' telling the truth sometimes will hurt both ourselves and friends.