Writing Feedback / Learning language by children is very beneficial. It is my essay for IELTS writing task 2 [6]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement ? Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your idea.

Language is the key of modern world, we cannot develop only one language in nowadays. I personally agree that learning language is very useful for children when they start at school's time. In the following paragraphs I will list personal, academic and professional sides to support my idea.

From the personal aspect, they faster recognize other countries' culture and they can obtain profitable experiences which they will need in life. For instance, the majority part of famous people started learning language very early as a result, they could gain their dreams and they have a lot of friends who live abroad.

From the academic side, Learning language early is beneficial to increase knowledge of children. For example, one of my classmate had been learning English since the first class. In the eighth class, he was very intelligence and he could get advantageous information through the strange books. It is evident from these examples that children who know foreign language are known with their knowledge than other children.

Coming to professional fact, Children can early absolve from their parents by earning money and they will easily find job if they know foreign languages. One particular decent example of this is that the majority part of employers require this type of youth. This example makes it clear that if children know foreign language, children will not have trouble on finding job.

By way of conclusion, learning language in early age is very essential and it bring a lot of benefits for all these sides. I hope that every parents will have children learnt foreign language in the future as years pass.

Writing Feedback / Children development and Tv - essay for ielts task 2 [4]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Watching television is bad for chilren. Use specific details and examples to support your answer.

In today's society, television is an essential part of our daily life. Yet it is claimed that watching TV is harmful for our children's development. But, it is my belief that, television is a crucial tool to lead personal as well as academic success for children.

From the personal point of view, television plays a vital role to broaden children's horizons. To be more specific, Children know outside even they do not exit from home such as they can obtain information about wild life. Another important benefit is that Children can acknowledge about our environment and about the importance of preserving wild life through watching TV. For instance, many research studies have shown that children who watch TV are less violent to animals. This example makes it clear that Tv makes children more kindly.

From the academic side, television offer programs which children can learn alphabet, numbers and also they can recognise colours. It implies that children can easy obtain new knowledge when they study at school. For example, my little brother watch cognitive programs about learning English. Yet, he does not study at school, however he can speak English. It is true that he can not speak as native speaker but he tries. He was interested in English through watching TV. It is evident from this example that Tv encourage children to learning.

By way of conclusion, Tv extend children's' outlook and It is also useful to learing. I believe that Tv will bring lots of benefits in the future than more nowadays.