Writing Feedback / The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. [7]

Do you still need the help with your paper? I have looked through it and I must tell you that it is not that bad. I would also give it to somebody who is maybe more good at it. Only professional writers may notice the minor mistakes. You may google where to find the top rated writers and which service is the cheapest one

Student Talk / Suggestions to Essay Writers [9]

Thanks a lot for your little reminders for us. I found your thread really helpful. I always forget the rule about the long sentences.

Student Talk / 'Composing mail' - written skill problem [12]

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Writing Feedback / List of problems people face being abroad - it's similar for all ages [2]

@Bams17
It is a pity that you cannot attach the bar. It will be easier for us to check if you are right or not. As far as I have understood, you have just described what you see on the chart, but don't you need to analyse the data? Try to compare that and come up with some reasons