Writing Feedback / The graphs exhibit the information on world population growth from 1800 to 2100 / Urban Populations [4]

Writing Task 1- The Figures of World Population Growth and Figures for Urban Populations

The graphs exhibit the information on world population growth from 1800 to 2100 and the number of urban populations in different world regions. Overall, it can be seen from the graph that the world population growth increased slightly from 1800 to 1940 and increased significantly from 1940 to 2040. Whereas, the world population growth decreased sharply between 2060 and 2100.

It is apparent from the figures that developing regions jumped significantly every five years. While, developed regions remained stable from 2015 to 2040. Furthermore, the number of people in developing regions increased sharply to 4000 millions in 2040. In contras to this, the number of populations in developed regions stayed the same about 1000 millions from 2015 to 2040.

In addition, the number of populations growth around 2500 millions in 1940. Then, the number of populations jumped dramatically around 8000 millions from 1960 to 2040. Hence, the world population growth reached a peak in 2040. And, the population growth declined steeply to 6000 millions in 2100.

Writing Feedback / Television is Challenging Hollywood [4]

Television is Challenging Hollywood

For years, watching Hollywood was supposed lower. Even though, things begin to change. At the moment, it is praised for its smart writing and talented actor. Television appears depend on well-crafted characters than well-known actors. Many people assumed The Sopranos is the biggest TV series in 1990. This series told about the life of the Italian-American mobster. In addition, some people are fans of Frank Darabond The Walking Dead, this is about gore and zombies. People tried to stay alive and stay with human in harmful world. On the other hand, the popular drama is Breaking Bad. It is about a chemistry teacher who has cancer and selling a medicine to pay his medical bills. Walter White was the main character. This movie won wide range of awards. These are several television appears which are challenging Hollywood. Only 90 minutes cannot be done to the movie.

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Writing Feedback / Summary: What Your Social Media Profile Photo Says About Your Personality [4]

What Your Social Media Profile Photo Says About Your Personality

Social media has become need everyone in the world. People upload profile photo in social media and it will describe their personality. There are an attempt to match the profile pictures about 66,000 Twitter users with their personality traits. Preoţiuc-Pietro and his colleagues analysed each person's 3200 most recent tweets. It is done to quickly categorize the personalities of thousands of Twitter users. On the other hand, from the group of 66,000 only 434 which completed a traditional psychological survey. extraversion, agreeableness, openness, conscientiousness and neuroticism were big five personality traits which scored by users. The research showed a correlation relationship between test results and the features of each profile picture. Nevertheless, Mandy Jennifer Golbeck at the University of Maryland want to see in profile pictures from other platforms such as Facebook. Meanwhile, said David Stillwell at the University of Cambridge that analysis of the profile pictures are not enough to replace a personality. There are several methods to describe a person's personality by combine the analysis of the profile photo and status of social media users.

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