Writing Feedback / If I would obtain a chance to go abroad then I would go to China [2]

You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks. Which country would you go?

First China, then Australia

Everyone love to travel around the world. I would obtain a chance to go abroad nation then I would go in china. In this essay, I will examine a reason behind, why I want to go china

Although china has a myriad thing to see. First of all, I am going to see Great Wall of china because it includes in seven wonders of the world. Additionally, in the night it looks spectacular and its great attraction for tourists. Secondly, I heard from my sagacious mentor, however, she told me about Chinese food so personally, I would like to go the divergent restaurant and keen to eat Chinese cuisine. Furthermore, China is famous for its enormous building, indeed, I am looking forward to seeing it and likewise work at a construction site as because I want to see diligent labor.

Moreover, I personally like to visit a faculty, as because China comprise of cutting edge technology at the university level. In addition, willing to look for science exhibitions, that are held at a university level. Albeit, I would curious to look for its art. Firstly, tradition dress, secondly, picture of landscape picture of the landscape of eminent Chinese personalities and also of an ancient collection of divergent unique things. I would like to meet Jackie Chan, likewise want to see Chinese malls and splendid temples. Furthermore, library would be one of the most important as because I am an avid reader of book. Importantly, transportation system and flow of traffic and underpasses as well as roads.

In conclusion, after visiting China my second destination will be Australia.

Writing Feedback / Art can soar economy of the country - spending money for it [5]

in the contemporary era , as significant amount of money is spend on arts . Some people think money should spend on arts whilst other ponder that money should spend on public services .

Is it worth to invest in Arts?

Admittedly , as art represent culture heritage of the country. There are manifold reasons that money must spend on arts . First of all , art can soar economy of the country . For instance , Turkey is famous for it is art , overwhelming majority of tourism come from divergent nations , although picture of landscape are in demand , yet Turkey is taking more and more concern towards art . Similarly , some people have creativity of making different pots , so they are export to other countries . Moreover , some musical theatre are abject source of happiness .

Nevertheless, a lions share money should highly spend on public service. Likewise , enriching the infrastructure such as building , road and electricity is the first element for sucess . However , establishing hospital with advance medical instrument and specialist doctor as will no taxes for poor . Albeit , imposing taxes on affluent , all money should go for philanthropic organization. Although improving job facilities providing indiviuals job so they can rudimentary neccesity of life . Furthermore transforming advance transportion and such as bullet train and modern bus , as well as low fare ticket .Government proving food , accomodation and clothes to philanthropic welfare . Building academic education on the inexpensive way as well improve it .

Ultimately , art is important , yet minuscale amount of money should spend on arts wheras enormous money on public service . Similarly , proving opperunity to every citizen by giving them jobs on merit[