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Name: Muhayyun Mapparenna
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Muhayyun Mappare   
Dec 30, 2016
Writing Feedback / The data on how fast world wide population growth in numbers and statistics of urban population [3]

Question :
The graphs below provide information on global population figures and figures for urban populations in different world regions.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs compare the data on how fast world wide population growth in numbers and statistics of urban population in different world regions. It can be seen that international population experienced a gradual increasing in previous years while there will be a sharply expectation growth in the next years. Besides, there was a rapid increasing in developed urban. On the other hand, there will be predicted a stable growth in developed regions.

The statistic of the world population was clearly pointing that the population growth in year 1800 to 1960 went up gradually between 1000 and roughly 2000 of population growth. Moreover, it will be predicted from around year 1960 to 2040 that population will be roughly 2000 to 8000. In contrary, along year 2040 to 2100 will go down steadly to be from 8000 to around 6000 population growth.

Besides, there is an expectation that in 2015 to 2040 will be a significant growing of pupulation in urban developed which it becomes around 2000 to 4000 population growth. On the other hand, there will be a stable of population growth from 2015 to 2040.

Muhayyun Mappare   
Dec 30, 2016
Writing Feedback / People who live in the world and the areas [3]

Hello ayra cantik
It would be better to mention the population and the year before the number among them
For example
... dramatically at 8000 of population in year 2040.
Muhayyun Mappare   
Dec 29, 2016
Writing Feedback / IELTS WRITING TASK 1, Table of Proportion of children in Australia [3]

The table provides the data of the proportion of children delivered by women with the age of 40-44 in 1981. Overall, it can be seen that the woman delivering children with none, one child, and two children chategories experienced an increasing trend, while the reverse witnessed in the remaining data.

The two children category was dominated in 1981 and was followed by The one and the none child chategories. However, in the next 25 years of the growth of children, The two children still dominated in 38,3% while the none children in 15,9% which opposited the one children chategories in 15,9%.

On the other hand, the four or more and the three children category grew up in 1981. Nevertheless, the three children chategory had experienced to increase gradually from 27,4 to 21,5% in 2006 while the four or more children chategory declined moderately from 27,6 to 11,0% in 2006.