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Last Post: Feb 23, 2017
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gcki   
Feb 23, 2017
Scholarship / KGSP 2017 - Letter of Self Introduction - One step closer to my dreams [5]

@Holt

Hi Holt Regarding my participation in bringing the cosmetic brand,I was not involve with the negotiating process. It was already brought here when I handled it. I was only assigned in checking and getting the products registered before its launch in the market. Although, I am the directly communicating with my Korean counterpart with certain concerns. Should I still include it?
gcki   
Feb 23, 2017
Scholarship / KGSP 2017 - Letter of Self Introduction - One step closer to my dreams [5]

my goal is so close



I grew up in a middle class family. My father is a Fiscal Compliance Officer while my mother is a housewife. Life was tough for us. It was not always bliss but we're taught to focus more on the positive things. We've faced setbacks and bumps along the way but my parents had always told us to stand up and treat those obstacles as learning experience. That lesson had helped me get through any failures that I have faced and potential problems that I will encounter in the future. I have learned from my parents the value of hard work. I was taught that through hard work and perseverance, achieving ones goal is possible. Whenever I would ask for something, my parents would let us earn it by having good grades or doing house chores. It may be such simple things but it instilled into us an important learning. My qualities of being a risk-taker and sociable are from my father. Those qualities had help him in entering the buy and sell business as a sideline. I have always been a dreamer. I have always hoped on running a business - a business that I would share with my family as way of giving back to them for lending their wings so I can fly. It may be a restaurant, a salon or even a clothing line. My father has inspired me to not only dream but to be a pursuer of it. And now, I am taking one step into achieving the future I have imagined.

My interest in business has led me to take up Bachelor of Science in Marketing in [UNIVERSITY]. In my course of choice, it was focused more on the understanding the connection between a business and its consumers. My academic years in college have been a fulfilling journey. Balancing my studies, social life and extracurricular activities became a challenge for me. I became a member of our university's Marketing Organization and was also accepted as one of the few scholars of [FOUNDATION]. Through patience and determination, I was able to maintain good grades and be included in Dean's list. In my second year graduation, I was able to receive an award as a student with honors. After years of managing my academic studies and other activities, I was able to graduate on-time and received a bachelor's degree on Marketing.

As a fresh graduate, I acquired a work as a Sales Administrative Assistant [COMPANY]., a fast-moving consumer goods company from 2014 to 2015. It was a challenging yet a learning experience for me since I handled tasks that are not my forte. The job was more focused on monitoring expense report and analyzing data. Nevertheless, I was able to acquire new learnings and was given another point of view of business process.

Currently, I have been working as a Marketing Assistant for [COMPANY], one of the well-known retail companies in the Philippines, since [MONTH] 2015. With this position, I assisted the product developers in creating new items for the brand. Not only I was able to oversee the entire process but I was involve in it. During my stay in [COMPANY]. I was also assigned to facilitate checking and registration of products of a Korean cosmetic brand that our company brought here in the Philippines. Being involved in the business process has rekindled my desire to have my own business. Running my own business means I need to be more informed with regards to the business industry. That pushed me to take my Master's degree.

The Korean Government Scholarship would allow me to study in Korea, a country who has gained robust growth in the business industry. The KGSP would also be an aide for me to not only broaden my knowledge of the field but also gain an understanding of the Korean business ideology through first-hand experience and help me develop my skills that would be of help for m in achieving my goal of becoming an effective business leader.

South Korea has been known to have an education setting of high quality. That is one of the reasons why I decided to study in Korea. Studying in a country whose educational setting is conducive to learning would help me focus more on my studies. Aside from the quality of education, I have been interested in the Korean culture - its cuisine, language and music. As I become more immersed in the Korean culture, I started studying the language independently. A new country means new a new environment and experiences. If given the chance to be accepted in the program, I would be able to interact with Korean businessman and mentors that will help me widen my perspective of the field and introduce me to new opportunities that would help me in achieving my goal.
gcki   
Feb 23, 2017
Writing Feedback / Food Production - is it important to know how our meal is produced? Or the taste only matters. [3]

Hi @Aziz_Gibran!

Here's my take on your essay.

1. ... food has changed. It does not only to fulfill theirbasic needs but also affectsas oneslifestyle. As a result, there are many considerations for people people take a lot of considerations before they buy (...) for buy some foods. when choosing the food that they are going to consume.

2. Most commonly, the limitation of time to ... Lack of time to prepare a meal is one of the few reasons why people, especially those work and live in a metropolitan city, depends on fast food when it comes to their meals

For example, for people who live in metropolitan ... Even in some occasions In some instances, this people they do not have an opportunity to spend their break times to visit restaurants around their offices. This would cause them to just order from other restaurant or fast food joints since it will be more convenient for them. They just call a certain restaurant to order ...

3. For example, for people who are addicted to into organic food, they ...

4. The essay also does not agree nor disagrees with the given statement to be proven. You can focus on either agreeing to the statement by expounding the busy lifestyle of people or you can disagree to it by explaining that more people are now into a healthy lifestyle making them be more conscious about their food.
gcki   
Feb 22, 2017
Student Talk / How to train the speaking ability without partner? [27]

Hi @aurora0102!

I am currently facing a dilemma similar to yours. What I usually do is practice through reading aloud and writing notes. There are also various apps available that can help you learn the language. Have a pocket dictionary so that whenever you see a word that you are unfamiliar with, you can translate it for a better understanding
gcki   
Feb 22, 2017
Scholarship / "Where there is will, there is a way" - my motto. Self introduction for KGSP [15]

Hi @azaa1428

Please observe proper grammar and punctuations. Whenever you're starting a new sentence, end the sentence preceding it with a period instead of a comma. It will confuse your reader. Also avoid unnecessary phrases that is not needed.

Hope this helps. :)
gcki   
Feb 22, 2017
Essays / Civil service in Korea. KGSP Self Introduction Content [20]

@Holt

I grew up in a middle class family. My father is a Fiscal Compliance Officer while my mother is a housewife. Life was tough but so is my family. I have learned from my parents the value of hard work. I was taught that ...

What do you think?
gcki   
Feb 21, 2017
Essays / Civil service in Korea. KGSP Self Introduction Content [20]

@Holt

Over the past few years, Philippines and South Korea have developed a close tie. Local corporations has been bringing brands from South Korea. In addition to that, business establishments, such as Korean restaurants, salon, spa and gracery stores, have been penetrating the Filipino market. These businesses have greatly captured the interest of the local market and has been succesful into attracting more consumers. Hence, having Korean investors in my country means a better understanding as to how and why they do businesses here in the Philippines. Applying for the Korean Government Scholarship Program would allow me to study in Korea, a country with robust development with regards to business and innovation. It would also be an aide for me to hone my knowledge of the business industry through lessons and experiences in a diverse community.

Any comments or suggestions? That's just a draft.
gcki   
Feb 20, 2017
Essays / Civil service in Korea. KGSP Self Introduction Content [20]

@Holt

Receiving a degree in Marketing was one of the notable achievements I have received. It paved way for experiences that molded me into what I am now. One of the things that motivated me to apply in Korean Government Scholarship Program is the idea of having a Master's degree would not only assist me with my career, but it will also broaden my perspective of the other areas of Business Administration that was not fully touched in my degree. Marketing is only a part of the several areas in the vast field of Business Administration. Moreover, it will help me to get me a good start on the advanced topics in the said field.

Any comment? Or suggestion regarding this part?
gcki   
Feb 19, 2017
Essays / Civil service in Korea. KGSP Self Introduction Content [20]

@Holt

Thanks! Since I'll move that part to the post study plans. Will it be better if I add the reasons why I chose that certain university to pursue my master's? E.g. the visions of the school would best fit the career path/goals that I would like to take?
gcki   
Feb 19, 2017
Essays / Civil service in Korea. KGSP Self Introduction Content [20]

@Holt

Thank you! I will take note of this when I revise my essay

"Moreover, I believe that in the business industry means having to push your boundaries to a greater horizon in order to achieve a better result. Being able to study in Korea will not only expand my cognizance of the culture but will also serve as an opportunity to hone my knowledge on the field of business through the guidance of the professors and colleagues"

What's your comment on this part?
gcki   
Feb 19, 2017
Essays / Civil service in Korea. KGSP Self Introduction Content [20]

@Holt

"A few months back, a friend of mine introduced me to Korean music. So as to understand more the meaning of each song, I began to learn the language independently. As of the moment, I can understand and speak basic Korean. During my free time, I try to broaden my knowledge of the language by practicing. Moreover, I started doing research regarding Korea's culture - its cuisine, language and traditions."

Should I include this?
gcki   
Feb 13, 2017
Essays / Civil service in Korea. KGSP Self Introduction Content [20]

@Holt

Hi Holt! I've actually passed the exam last year and already have the certificate for. The only thing is I haven't worked for the government yet. So it's still okay for me to include it right?

Ohh, for the language program. I'm already studying the language here in our country but it's not a formal education. I'm self studying. Although, I can speak and understand (but not fluently). Should I also include that?
gcki   
Feb 13, 2017
Essays / Civil service in Korea. KGSP Self Introduction Content [20]

@Holt

I actually don't have an experience in working for the government. But I am planning on working for the government that's way I took the civil service exam. Also, I will be applying in a public university run by the government in Korea, so I thought mentioning my passing of civil service exam would boost my application.

Anyway, wouldn't it be a disadvantage if I mention planning on working in Korea after I graduated from my Master's degree?

Thanks Holt!
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