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Posts by Nisa_sultan
Name: Khaerunnisa Sultan
Joined: Mar 20, 2017
Last Post: Mar 22, 2017
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From: Indonesia
School: Makassar State University

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Nisa_sultan   
Mar 22, 2017
Writing Feedback / High school graduate or experience which important to get job? [3]

Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job. On the other hand, people think that getting experience and developing soft skill is more important.

Discuss both side and give your opinion.


High school graduation or experience



Some of people believe that graduate from high school is the best way to get job in the future. Yet, other believe experience and soft skill is crucial point to get job in the future. This essay will discuss which important completing university education or getting experience and developing soft skill.

Graduate from university has great opportunity for job seekers. It is because most of company nowadays look for employees who has certificate of high school due to they have basic knowledge and skill to hold of position in a company. Therefore, the employers tend to choose job seekers who had finished their high school as their employees. Take my experience as an example, when I was visited job fair almost of company has general requirements that is certificate of high school, as like HRD position. It is because this position will use psychology tools due to he/she have to have basic knowledge and skill to use this tools when they fill this position.

In contrast, have certificate as graduate without experience also has problems. Because world work usually followed unpredictable thing that not mention in book. Hence, experience will help at this situation. Take mechanic as an example, in which some of them not graduate from high school but they learn about machine since they was young. Therefore, they usually face and solve problems from their experience and also when they solve their problems they will increase their ability.

To sum up, have basic knowledge and skill can help employees to adapt with their job but without experience will be obstacle and might slumped their job performance. Therefore, I tend to believe that as employees we must have both of them to get best job future.
Nisa_sultan   
Mar 22, 2017
Writing Feedback / Don't be a victim of interview bias [3]

Hello @ RogerPham I interested to suggest comment on your essay and I hope will help you to write. I think you should write "bias as one of reasons" because I think there is other reason why interviewer to fail on their interview.

Keep writing @ RogerPham.
Nisa_sultan   
Mar 22, 2017
Scholarship / SOP for Exchange Program to Chungnam National University [3]

Hello @ EarthJupiterian I interseted to suggest you some comments on your essay and I hope will help you. On your essay you wrote "can truly help me both in enhancing my academic", you should wrote "can be truly help me both in enhancing my academic". And also I did not find strong reason why should be accepted for this program, I suggest you to add impact for other if you accept as participant on this program.

Keep fighting..!!
Nisa_sultan   
Mar 20, 2017
Writing Feedback / Celebrating Food - Traditional food will change by fast food ? [2]

Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation.

Celebrating Food



Fast food these day become life stayle around citizent especially who live in urban area and change habitual inhabitans to eat. It is also might take place traditional food on heart the consumer who prefer to allow this life stayle. To be frankly honest, I totaly disagree with this motion due to several reasons.

Fast food restaurant nowadays is sparse almost every sides in the city. This is because it affordable for every one to buy and also simple to eat anywhere anytime that consumer want it. This hapen caused of fast food restaurant have their own way to attrack buyers to buy it in one pack, such as in french chicken resaturant in which sell chicken, rice, drink, and desert in low price. Therefore, it as draw for consumer particulary who have limit savings money but want to eat delicious food. Moreover, fast food also easy to bring and to consume hence, employees tend to choose this one as their lunch owing to limited time to rest.

In spite of that, slowly but sure traditional foods take them place again as popular cuisine in the midle of citizent. It is because some of people believe that fast food has higher risk as source disease such as cancer. Therefore, people who realise that prefer to consume traditional food than fast food. Besiedes, special cuisine to celebrate event such as Id Mubarak will not replaced by fast food restaurant due to, this as culture to eat that will be continuous as identical food to celebrate Id Mubarak.

As matter of fact, attandence of fast food restaurant can cause people easier particullary worker who have deadline for lunch and limit money. Yet, it might drive disease and also can not replace memoriable food to celebrate special event.
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