Scholarship / Need your kind attention to review my response to Chevening Scholarship question. [4]

Respected Holt I have amended as per your instruction
I am intending to do my postgraduate studies in one of these three universities: Coventry University, Bristol UWE and Queens University of Belfast. I have a conditional offer for master in Construction Management in Coventry University. Firstly, Construction Management course at Coventry is purely Industry focused and have flexibility for group and individual research project. A Global professional development module in C.M at Coventry in collaboration with CMI (Charted management institute) for practical leadership and for complex problem solution is enthralling thing to explore there. Secondly, I have an admission offer of University of West of England Bristol, master in Construction Project Management. This course is associated with frequent site visit, field work and attracted my attention as one can utilize the material and data from the home country in the dissertation, compares it with host country and can enrich the learning there. So master education from this institute with pragmatic experience of construction industry utilizing advance technique would provide me the sufficient knowledge, experience to solve the schedule delay issue as I am currently researching on this topic in collaboration with Lewis Toms (Mott MacDonald P.M).

Subsequently, I am also intending to apply for Master in Construction and Project Management in Queens university of Belfast. I personally feel that I can satisfactorily meet the requirement of this course. It contains modules Planning and Control research, Construction laws and Dispute resolution, which are commensurate to my current work and previous qualification. Working as a Planning Engineer at New Islamabad Airport project with CSCEC, I have been involved in the project control team of highly experience and qualification. Dissolving schedule delay issues practically, generating different claims as per contracts, including an Extension of time (Forensic Planning) will conspicuously help me to successfully meet the demand of this course. Moreover, my final year research was also in the domain of Construction project management.

I strongly believe that my relevant experience, online course pertaining to project management, software skills which I took, in subsequence to sound knowledge of B.Sc. Civil Engineering will considerably facilitate me to conduct research and meet demands of these intended courses. It is considered imperative to mention that many publicly funded projects in Pakistan get delay and we are still practicing obsolete construction project management techniques. There is scarcity of professional with specified knowledge of Construction project management as only one university in Pakistan is offering specialization. So, master in CPM will considerably help me with career advancement, implementing research outcomes in the domestic construction industry. Eventually, continuing my current research and above-mentioned factors in mind Chevening Scholarship is the best opportunity to actualize my postgraduate study in a developed country in the desired program.

Scholarship / Need your kind attention to review my response to Chevening Scholarship question. [4]

Thanks for your effective inputs I am going to modify it

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Scholarship / Using new ideas and strategies acquired from Chevening in Africa [4]

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Scholarship / Opening new avenues to materialize my dreams - review my Chevening application question response [3]

Holt . Your seriatim productive response is highly appreciated . I shall try to incorporate your recommendation, i.e. To have submissive tone and one story to elucidate skills in the next version. thanks

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