Writing Feedback / Eductional achievements - " pen and paper" exams [2]

Many people believe that formal " pen and paper" examinations are not the bestmethod of assessing educational achievement.What is your view of examinations?

The quality of education should be properly controlled

All people admitted that taking care of the quality of education has been the most important because of its main role. In order to assess educational achievement well, the Government need to have a right method and one of a formula mentioned is formal " pen and paper" examinations. Some people said that it was not the best method. For me, I agree with this idea.

Actually, there are many benefits of this test way. Assessing through out " pen and paper" is the good way for teacher to check the deeply knowledge of a student. If the pupils undestand a lesson, they will present with a right way. In contrast, it is difficult for judge to read the answer sheet. For example, the difference between formal " pen and paper" examination and online test. I have a simple exercise that " my father has two pencils, I give three pencil to my father . How many pencil does my father have?".

When competitors present on the paper, they have to write that "2 plus 3 equal 5". However, they will only mark on the box that contains number 5 if they have an online test. No one can confirm that it was their thinking because it can also their guesses. Morever, more students are appreciated equal score in " pen and paper" examination than in multiple choice. No matter where contender understands, Judge will give score to competitor in essay and he will not be got any score in multiple choice, if his answer wrong.

Everything has both sides. Some students have the rote learning phenomenon. It is reason why they can get high score but they can not practice in fact. Beside that, student must assume the time to present the result so fewer form question are asked to students in formal " pen and paper" examinations than in multiple choice. There fore, teacher can't assess all. In contrast, creating different form questions in an exam is the best way to assess the ability of the students.

In conclusion, the formal " pen and paper" examinations are not the best method of appreciating educational level but it has many feasible things. I hope it will be supported and improved so as to become the effective way and education in many countries will develop.

Writing Feedback / Convenience foods and people's health [4]

Topic: Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Food in the modern world

In the past, in the poor period, people only ate a little rice with a few foods. However, it was meaningful.The foods were clear and good for our health. The longevily of elders were high and they were also strong. Nowaday, in the modern term, all are constrast. Gradually, convenience foods and traditional methods of food preparation are replaced because of many reason:

Firstly, i want to mention about convenience foods. The pressure of job, learning or earning money make people hurried. As a result, they do not have time to prepare for their meals and instant noodle becomes their friend.It is easy to cook a bowl of noodle and it also consumpt a little time. Morever, the tasty of fast food is delicious so most of people like it. I am a student, for example, i am so busy all day. Therefore, after returning from school at 11 o'clock, i am pretty tired, i often eat noodle for lunch because i want to take a rest and i also have to go school in the afternoon.

Secondly, the way to cook is really changed. Although we know that eating processed food is not good, we eat it. In the past, my mother spent time on preparing food. She washed fishes, pork or beef and marinate. Then, she cooked or grilled. I feel these dishes delicious, safe and healthy. Morever, my mother also felt happy because she left her heart in the foods and we complimented on her foods.However, it is not so. Not only is it processed by industry, it is also added some poisons which are not good for our health. Then, user only pours the boil water to the noodle and eat. These feelings about cooking dishes are not existed in the modern life.

In conclusion, the modern people are not as in the past anymore. They have hurried life. The do not enjoy themself. I think we need to change now. We change because of our health and we change because of our the next generation.

Writing Feedback / Society needs to create opportunities for everyone, thus gender equality should be encouraged. [5]

Topic: Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?

Equality at work a workplace

Actually, there are some jobs that the cardinal workforce is male such as police, director In contrast, the rate of female in profession is higher than that one for example : beautician. However, it doesn't mean all. The world still has police who are the girls, beauticians who are the boys. And in this life, we need to support equality. Don't have certain thought like the past that males must do these jobs females must do those job.

Firstly, it is not unfair. In equality society, humans have free rights. They can choose jobs which they want. In contrast, if it is right to exclude makes or females from certain professing because of their gender. It means that the freedom of humans is lost. For me,

Who are you, you have your privated passion, you will succeed if you try. Government and society said that they would create all chances for citizens to pursue their dream. In this case, this sentence will not be accepted. Because it prevents somepeople from their dream.For example, if i want to be a carpenter, it will not be true as it is the job for male but i am a girl.

Secondly, if we still do it, gerder inequality will continue increasingly. While the father is a director, the mother is a housewife. While the father goes out everyday that he can enjoy the life, the mother is only at home and around the kitchen. Therefore, we can see the distinguish obviously. We do not eliminate this problem,but also we are making it better. Why must we think so? Why don't we give to woman a chance that she can present herself. I sure that she can do anything that we can not imagine.

In conclusion, gender equality should be encouraged. Society needs to create opportunities for everyone. As a result, humans can have experiences in many fields, the life will become equality and happy.