I think he chooses to disagree already by saying:"I support the view that the benefits of technological advances far outweigh their drawbacks." instead of saying "I agree/disagree". I don't know if it is okay or not but it seems reasonable.
Last month, I had the worst experience ever with a speciality Thailand cuisine which was called Thai hot pot. I had it while I was visiting a Thai food festival. Hearing that it is one of the most delicious dishes in Thai Lan because of its mildly spicy and a bit of sour flavour combined with nutrition beef meat, but contrary to what I expected, the broth tasted immensely spicy and sour. Miserably, it hurt my tongue badly and made me shed tears. It was the worst experience I ever had. And I would never try Thai hot pot again. If I had gone back time, I would have chosen other dishes.
I'm practicing for the Ielts speaking test, please help me!
You need to fix some grammar, article and preposition mistakes: "have appeared"; "one of them is the music industry"; "All the need offor music"; "more easier"; " necessary infor today's life"
I'm not an expert writer but I think fixing these mistake will help you gain a higher score. Furthermore, your idea is good and easy to understand but you need to extend it a little bit more because the ielts task 2 require at least 250 words. Thanks for reading my feedback.
I think you should watch out for your article: "in a well-off family", "a child of a poor family", "with the barest", "in a prosperous condition", "in a wealthy family"
A second-hand thing which I own is an electric piano. Actually, its first owner is a pianist and he used to play the piano but now he doesn't. I bought it last month and he discounted gradually for me. Fortunately, I could afford it even though it is a second-hand electric piano, it was made by Kawaii, probably one of the most trustable piano manufacture. The electric piano is just absolutely convenient for me because I can plug in my headphones without bothering anyone. Furthermore, it does sound beautiful and as hearing as a grand piano although the touch is not quite emotional at all. Overall, I love my piano and happily, I can afford it myself without lending my parent's money. On these quarantine days, I will try my best to practice my favourite song.
- I'm practising for my speaking/writing skill for the ielts essay, please help me!
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