Posts by tandlvn2003

tandlvn2003

Apr 25, 2020

Writing Feedback / IELTS task 2: modern innovations bring a lot of problems than benefits [4]

"technology breakthrough" -> "technological breakthrough",

ations brings mo

I think he chooses to disagree already by saying:"I support the view that the benefits of technological advances far outweigh their drawbacks." instead of saying "I agree/disagree". I don't know if it is okay or not but it seems reasonable.

tandlvn2003

Apr 25, 2020

Student Talk / How start to write?I have to take score 7 in ielts exam! [24]

I think you should practice reading to improve your writing also listening to improve your speaking.

tandlvn2003

Apr 20, 2020

Writing Feedback / Describe a time you ate something you did not like [2]

Last month, I had the worst experience ever with a speciality Thailand cuisine which was called Thai hot pot. I had it while I was visiting a Thai food festival. Hearing that it is one of the most delicious dishes in Thai Lan because of its mildly spicy and a bit of sour flavour combined with nutrition beef meat, but contrary to what I expected, the broth tasted immensely spicy and sour. Miserably, it hurt my tongue badly and made me shed tears. It was the worst experience I ever had. And I would never try Thai hot pot again. If I had gone back time, I would have chosen other dishes.

I'm practicing for the Ielts speaking test, please help me!

Thanks for reading.

tandlvn2003

Apr 20, 2020

Writing Feedback / IELTS task 2. Why do we need music? Is the traditional one more important the international music [4]

You need to fix some grammar, article and preposition mistakes: "have appeared"; "one of them is the music industry"; "All the need of for music"; "~~more~~ easier"; " necessary in for today's life"

I'm not an expert writer but I think fixing these mistake will help you gain a higher score. Furthermore, your idea is good and easy to understand but you need to extend it a little bit more because the ielts task 2 require at least 250 words. Thanks for reading my feedback.

tandlvn2003

Apr 20, 2020

Writing Feedback / IELTS Writing task 2: Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared [5]

I think you should watch out for your article: "in a well-off family", "a child of a poor family", "with the barest", "in a prosperous condition", "in a wealthy family"

also verb form: "when becomiing adult"

tandlvn2003

Apr 12, 2020

Writing Feedback / Describe a second-hand thing that you own. [3]

Used electric piano

A second-hand thing which I own is an electric piano. Actually, its first owner is a pianist and he used to play the piano but now he doesn't. I bought it last month and he discounted gradually for me. Fortunately, I could afford it even though it is a second-hand electric piano, it was made by Kawaii, probably one of the most trustable piano manufacture. The electric piano is just absolutely convenient for me because I can plug in my headphones without bothering anyone. Furthermore, it does sound beautiful and as hearing as a grand piano although the touch is not quite emotional at all. Overall, I love my piano and happily, I can afford it myself without lending my parent's money. On these quarantine days, I will try my best to practice my favourite song.

- I'm practising for my speaking/writing skill for the ielts essay, please help me!