simonp00
Dec 21, 2020
Undergraduate / What is Important to you? And Why - Bond with my mother [4]
Throughout times of depression and adversities, my mother has always shown me her unconditional love and support. The bond I have with my mother is what is important to me. When I was eighteen years old, I was living in Edmonton alone. I had suffered a period of major depression and had no friends or family in the city to support me. I had told her that I had been admitted to a psychiatric hospital due to the severity of my depression, and about a couple of days later, to my surprise, she had shown up at the hospital where I had been admitted at. The experience of her encouragement gave me the inclination of adopting a supportive characteristic to the friends around me. Her support and love were key factors for me overcoming my depression and many more tribulations in my life.
I know I need to develop this paragraph more, I would love some feedback and assistance on it. Thank you :)
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Throughout times of depression and adversities, my mother has always shown me her unconditional love and support. The bond I have with my mother is what is important to me. When I was eighteen years old, I was living in Edmonton alone. I had suffered a period of major depression and had no friends or family in the city to support me. I had told her that I had been admitted to a psychiatric hospital due to the severity of my depression, and about a couple of days later, to my surprise, she had shown up at the hospital where I had been admitted at. The experience of her encouragement gave me the inclination of adopting a supportive characteristic to the friends around me. Her support and love were key factors for me overcoming my depression and many more tribulations in my life.
I know I need to develop this paragraph more, I would love some feedback and assistance on it. Thank you :)