Posts by ALU08008

ALU08008

Jan 10, 2021

Writing Feedback / IETS WRITING TASK 2 (People will read everything online instead of printed news or books) [3]

At the opening paraphrase maybe you can try to shorten your presentation and go straight to your point. There are too many your own own state to over represent the topic thus you can keep your idea to the second paraphrase.

Secondly, try to put on some adversative word such as ''on the one hand.....,on the other hand'', ''however'', ''therefore'', ''furthermore''. It can make viewer more easily to catch your key point.

ALU08008

Jan 10, 2021

Writing Feedback / IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - OVERPOPULATION - PROBLEM & SOLUTION [3]

At the first paraphrase straight to your point at the beginning, then an explanation of what the discussion topic is about. This will be more clear and acceptable, it would have been even better had you reworded explaining sentence covering the reference to why people gather to urban areas.

ALU08008

Jan 9, 2021

Student Talk / It's phobia? I know how to plan, discuss and analyze any topic, but can't write anything [7]

I guess you are a perfectionist that lead you afraid the essay doesn't meet your standards and also you are hard to accept other's advice to tell correct your errors. Here is my experience that I come from Taiwan where is seldom to use english even we take education early when we were just in kindergarten, I still afraid to talking to the foreigns. Until once activity I must have to interact and cooperated to people who come from 15 different country. That time my friend tell me that it is not matter if you speak like a native speaker or not the most important thing is to let your partner understand your idea no one focus your pronounce. Since this experience I think some time "Just Do it" like this quote from NIKE told. Just Do it or you will never know what will happen and the result behind.

hope this self-experience sharing can be a encouragement to you.
good luck!

ALU08008

Jan 9, 2021

Student Talk / How to train the speaking ability without partner? [27]

There are some tips to enhance my speaking skills and hope that it can help you.

1. use every spare minutes to do, such as commuting time, shower, housework. turn on the radio or any voice tunnel you like and repeat their sentence loudly or you can record your practice. Pretend the podcast host is your partner when he/she ask question then you can answer any idea you thought.

2. join a group that people have the same goal to improve their speaking skill. gathering to be each other's motivation. imitate everyone's strength and extend your vocabulary. then when you face the question next time you can remind yourself and give more interest ideas.

ALU08008

Jan 9, 2021

Writing Feedback / IELTS task 2＿the role of teacher in modern education [2]

In the past, the role of teacher was to provide information. Today, student have access to wide sources of information. There is therefore, no role of teacher in modern education.

DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE.

It is true that now students are easy to catch the new information with the progress of the technology, the internet can quickly broaden students' horizons, especially everyone has their own smartphone. Since this situation in our daily life, there is a doubt about what kind of the role that teacher has to play. While as my opinion I still believe there are several reasons to prove the value and the necessity of teacher.

Firstly, even there are plenty of informations but if you can't distinguish and categorize the resources true or fake, it will be a disaster. Teacher through all the training and pass the tests to become tutor with independent thinking ability the most important skill that students have to enhance nowadays. In order to develop the independent thinking teacher could be a major bridge to help students building their own world view. For example the website are fulfill with much violent and pornography. In my case, when I was a child I addicted and lose myself on online world during that time I become more frustrated and irritated easily but it is fortunate that teacher find out my change and give me some advices to deal with my emotion and how to avoid the negative website. I trust that in these day thus all the answers can find simply but teacher can not only offer their help on emotion problem but also share their own experience of life that website can't give.

Furthermore, teacher could be your tower when losing direction in your life. Some people said that good teacher is like your second parent. Building relationship with teacher will be a motivation to improve and may be a key point to change students' live. To sum up, although there are fulfill information but I fully support teacher take a important role to students and I believe it won't change in the future.