Posts by connan0702

connan0702

Nov 9, 2009

Letters / Don't expel my classmates - letter to the principal (practice) [6]

how about this?

leading our team to the 1/8 finals in Northeastern University's College Students Debate Contest. I received the "Best Estimated Participant" title as captain of the team/

connan0702

Nov 8, 2009

Letters / Don't expel my classmates - letter to the principal (practice) [6]

please make it more professional, this is one part of my out of class activities

As the captain, I led our major representative team to enter the 1/8 Final in the College Students Debate Contest organized by Northeastern University; also, I received the "Best Estimated Participant" title.

connan0702

Oct 31, 2009

Graduate / the National Natural Science Foundation - help with wording and sentence revise. [4]

My focus of this statement is to emphathize the researches that i have done in my undergraduate studies, and this is one of the two. but when i finished this, what i felt was i do not know what to write next?

connan0702

Oct 31, 2009

Graduate / the National Natural Science Foundation - help with wording and sentence revise. [4]

In June 2009, the instructor of our team in National College Students Innovative Projects asked me to participate in the National Natural Science Foundation Project team. This research project focuses on the fully coupled thermal visco-elastic in rubber and its composite ---- with regard to the fatigue damage, the temperature field and interface analysis of mechanical properties of rubber composite materials. By means of finite element analysis, I simulate the situations of fiber breakage between rubber and subsidiary body under the action of cyclic stress, and to carry out numerical analysis. The whole implementation has been tested and under processing.

connan0702

Oct 31, 2009

Writing Feedback / help revise wording or grammer, about aero-model [2]

In the National College Students Innovative Projects organized by the Ministry of Education, June 2008, our team established the project named "Design and Production of Load Aero-model and Electric Aero-model" under the guidance of our instructor. By using the drawings of aircraft models designed by CAD (Computer Aid Design), we verified the structural strength of the model components through FEA (Finite Element Analysis). By taking full advantage of the mechanical properties of different materials, we enhanced the strength of the model and improved the structure of the fuselage, so as to achieve flying stability and flexibility of the aero-model. During the project, I was mainly responsible for the wing design and production, the assembly of the control system, the simulation and finite element analysis of the wings, and on this basis, the structural improvement.

connan0702

Oct 24, 2009

Graduate / Personal statement for a Master program- Need assistance [8]

The personal statement is an essay, generally under 1,000 words, which is designed to give the selection committee a sense of who you are and how closely your goals and strengths match the ideals of a specific fellowship. In this essay you have a great deal of flexibility on how to organize and present your thoughts, but you should be sure to cover the following basic points:

your qualifications for the given fellowship
how the fellowship fits in with your personal and professional goals
A personal statement is generally most effective when it concentrates on:

1an issue or experience that you feel strongly about, or one that has helped to shape who you are
2a significant accomplishment or contribution you have made to your field or community
this is the common requirement of the universtiy. and remember to write from outlines,then details and then revise. any questions, free to contact me.