Writing Feedback / The line graph illustrates both fossil fuel energy and clean energy consumption in the USA [4]

report about consumption of energy

The line graph illustrates both fossil fuel energy and clean energy consumption in the USA started from 1980 with predictions until 2030.

Overall, fossil fuel energy (Petrol and Oil, Coal, Natural Gas) were widely used then clean energy and had experienced a moderate growth within the period. In contrast, clean energy (Nuclear, Solar wind, Hydropower) rarely consumed, fluctuated throughout the period.

Petrol and Oil started at 35 quadrillion unit fluctuated until 1995 followed by a gradual rise and is assumed to continue. Likewise, coal and natural gas started at 15 and 20 respectively. Natural gas fluctuated and reached a plateau just under 25 in 2015, while coal slightly increase after 2015 and is predicted to reach 30 in 2030.

On the other Hand, clean energy stood just under 5 in 1980, fluctuated until 2005, Hydropower experienced a mile declination and stayed constant at about 3 units in 2010. Nuclear rose moderately and expected to exceed 5 units in 2030.

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Writing Feedback / [IELTS] Writing Task 1: The chart illustrates consumption of three kinds of fast food by teenagers [2]

fast food consumption chart

TOPIC:
The chart illustrates the consumption of three kinds of fast food by teenagers in Mauritius from 1985 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

MY ANSWER:

The line graph depics three types of fast food which includes hamburgers, pizza and fried chicken consumed by Mauritius teenagers between 1985 to 2015.

Overall, the quantity of teenagers having hamburgers and fried chicken per year showed a significant rise over the period, while the number of pizza eaten experienced a downward trend.

In 1985, teenagers ate hamburgers and Fried chicken approximately 10 and 5 times per year respectively. After an initial increase until 1995, the number of fried chicken eaten increased sharply from 20 to 40 times per year within a decade, exceeding the number of pizza and hamburgers in 2000 and remains steadily after 2005.With a similar trend, the consumption of hamburger increased steadily and reached 70 times per year in 2015. Marked as the most popular fast food.

In contrast, teenagers consumed pizza 60 times per year in 1985. It decreased rapidly throughout the period and end at 10 times per year. The number of pizza eaten was the highest among these three fast food and it ended as the lowest in 2015. It was out traced by both hamburger and Fried Chicken in 2000.

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Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 1: LINE GRAPH - the number of cars registered for the first time by fuel type [3]

The chart below shows the number of cars registered for the first time by fuel type from 2001 to 2016.

Summarise the infomation by selecting and reporting the key features and making comparisons where relevant.

MY ANSWER:

This chart hightlights 3 type of fuels used for the first time by registered cars from 2001 to 2016.

Number of petrol used started at 2 million and has a downward trend in the first decade.
After reaching a trough of approximately under 1 million in 2011, there was an increase of about half a million for the next 6 years.

In contrast, the number of diesel used had slightly rose for 15 years before it fell rapidly by 1 million to 0.5 million within 5 years.

By a wide margin, Alternative fuels was not used in the first decade. Instead, starting from 2011, it was moderately increase by about two hundred thousand.

Marking it as the least poplar fuel used by car.

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