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Name: harshita
Joined: Mar 4, 2022
Last Post: Mar 4, 2022
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harshita   
Mar 4, 2022
Scholarship / LANGUAGE STUDY PLAN-GKS GRADUATE PROGRAM- MASTER'S IN ARTS AND DESIGN [4]

Hello, I am applying for the GKS graduate program this year. This is my Language Study Plan. I appreciate it if some will critique and give advice. Thank you

"Language is something that will never betray you nor leave you."



When I read this quote, I was so galvanized by the thought of learning different languages. In school when I was in 6th Standard, there was the option of opting for a new foreign language 'FRENCH'. That was the time when I read this quote and choose to learn French. For three years I learned French. The course of learning French was for those 3 years only so after that due to the lack of practice and load of further higher education, the knowledge I gained began to disappear from my education. At that time I was very much disappointed in myself that if I had paid A little bit more attention to it, I would have known it till now.

When I was doing my graduation, I encountered some people who does not know our language 'HINDI' or cannot speak much good English. At that time, we used to converse using the translator. The thought that came to my mind was that if I had known other languages, it would not be an issue. So I started learning different languages by watching different educational videos, series of that particular language, etc. But I was not able to learn anyone properly due to the lack of physical education and assistance. Now as I am applying for South Korea for my further education, I have started preparing for my IELTS and planning to apply for examination by the end of MARCH 2022 aiming to the band score above 7.5-8.0.

If I get the opportunity to study in South Korea through the GKS program, I will start preparing for my education in the Korean Language systematically. When I was learning the Korean language online through different videos, dramas, and movies, I came to learn some words, expressions, phrases, but I still cannot speak or read properly. I have learned 'HANGUL' characters so I can read, write and understand a few things like numbers, different categories of words (transport, profession, etc.). But for learning that is not enough until you make sentences from these words. To be satisfied in learning the Korean Language, I will soon after my learning course, will apply for the TOPIK examination as Korean proficiency to score above 3.5-4.0.
harshita   
Mar 4, 2022
Writing Feedback / Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of online course as well as learning online [4]

In this text, the topic is not explained properly. Try to elaborate your content in relation to the topic. The comparison should be done simultaneously for the same reason or example like if the writer needs to compare the atmosphere, it has to be done both ways. Use more examples to support your text..
harshita   
Mar 4, 2022
Writing Feedback / Paragraph about saving a natural resource [3]

If there is no word limit in writing this essay, add some more reasons to support your topic like what all water bodies have been dried out with the increase in usage. Try to use some synonyms for making it more impressive.
harshita   
Mar 4, 2022
Scholarship / PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR GKS SCHOLARSHIP 2022_GRADUATE_ ARTS AND DESIGN [3]

Hello, I am applying for the GKS graduate program this year. This is my Personal Statement. I appreciate it if some will critique and give advice. Thank you

PERSONAL STATEMENT


I have pursued my graduation from the XXXXXX in 2018. When I was pursuing this course I came across a dream of choosing the profession of becoming a well-rounded curator and establishing an art gallery. But as I was researching about what a curator is, how to become a curator, what all qualifications are needed, from where I can pursue this course, etc., I came up with myriad options about the places and universities for which I can apply for. From those options, I decided to choose South Korea as my graduation destination. When I was researching what all relevant courses and benefits I can apply for, then I came to know the South Korean Government has issued different types of scholarship programs, I came to know that there is a scholarship program, i.e., Global Korean Scholarship, that provides fully-funded support for education. Not only have they provided full funded support but also myriad benefits for the international students. I believe that if I get this opportunity it will provide the golden opportunities to grasp my education thoroughly as well as act as a bridge to accomplish life goals.

My family consists of four members. My father is 55 years old and runs his own business in XXXX, Jaipur. My mother is a housewife and is 45 years old. I have a younger brother of 22 years of age who is pursuing his Bachelor's graduation. From the time of my adolescence to my adulthood, my parents have always encouraged me for my passion for arts and crafts. My school life was also full of creative opportunities in terms of being a member of the student council as an assistant to my art professor, the project designer in high school, and even the assistant coordinator for the school events. My graduation major was also in Event Management as, according to my parents, this industry is the most creative field for me to prosper in.

The most memorable experience I would reason was 'XXXXXXXX'. The Founder of that event was Mr. XXXX Sir. The duration of the event was about 7 days, with 'n' number of movies from all over the world. I have done the internship with 'XXXXXX' for around 3-4 months. I have seen that event from the very first step from planning the event, paperwork about the guest coming, movies to be on screen, inviting the guests and movie directors, venue hunting, and all the possible work that has to be done for the event. When I was doing that event, despite me there were 2-3 interns more. We all were working on our designated tasks. As I was the project manager, there was a lot more workload was there for me to do with handling the work of other interns. As the time of the event was coming close, we all were getting a lot busier. There was a situation that arose 2-3 days before the first day of the event the platform made for the directors to give their interviews and Q/A with the audiences, the decorator for the event was encountered with a severe accident which was why he canceled the contract. As we heard that news, we all were in a great panic as now what to do. To solve that situation we came up with the solution that we will hire a stage maker who will make the stage structure and for the decoration, I decided that I will personally make the decoration items myself in those remaining days. Then I called everyone in my family (my cousins, my friends, even involved my parents) who so ever could come, and asked them to help me in making the decoration. I used two types of materials, i.e., colored cloth and different sizes of beads. I put them into a vertical string as a dropdown. As I made one sample, I told everyone to make the same but in different lengths. We all together made around 100-150 dropdown strings in 3 days. Now as the decoration was successfully made, we interns as well as our event founder, all started hanging those dropdowns on the supportive horizontal wire. When the directors and reporters came to the stage area, they were mesmerized to see that kind of decoration as it was handmade and was nowhere to be seen again. At the time of interviews, that stage was for the interviewers, the remaining time the stage became the picture attraction for the audiences. After the event was completed, every director and the guests praised us for the stage that we made and were very much happy with the management for the same. I was so very much thankful to everyone who helped me solve the crisis on such short notice. With this experience, I was very much delighted as without my team and my family/friends' help I could not have been achieved my goal of the success of that particular event. With this, I would like to assert "Teamwork is always the direct key to success whether it is in life or work".

This was just one of many experiences that I have encountered in my life. Despite this, there were many other events that I have worked in as a trainee as well as an intern for a few months just for a particular event. During my school years, I was always the student doing all kinds of work like an assistant to teachers, annual function volunteer, and participant, display board designer for both school corridors as well classrooms, etc. I have also participated in many inter-school and inter-house (with-in-school premises) competitions. As my graduation was in event management, I have done all kinds of events during that duration such as corporate events (conferences, exhibitions, etc.), private events (weddings, themed parties, etc.), and charity events (competitions, concerts, sports events, etc.)

In my schools years, I was awarded as an inter-school competition winner, member of the student council, national essay competition runner-up for English, and winner for Hindi and as an active student. Because of my skills in creativity during the graduation years, I was awarded as the Student of the Year in my second year. But now as I have another dream to fulfill, I had to take my time off from this industry. Still, there are different experiences that I gain during my both school years and college years, which I believe can be of great help to me in my further education.
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