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Posts by kasi_gem
Joined: Feb 20, 2010
Last Post: Mar 2, 2010
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kasi_gem   
Mar 2, 2010
Writing Feedback / Explain why you like (or do not like) to work in a team. [5]

well i realy do agree with what is discribed in topic ...

personally i like to work in a network where there is no monoarchy . like that

n i don't think that there is some thing to be improved in your essay ...
kasi_gem   
Feb 26, 2010
Writing Feedback / micheal jackson : rock with you [4]

yup it might seem to be a wiki . material but its really authentic . i could write it in a way you expressed , but what i wanted was to give some kind of homage to mj....this is it....
kasi_gem   
Feb 25, 2010
Writing Feedback / micheal jackson : rock with you [4]

1958: when Michael was born in lower middle class family with a curse of being black. The family was musical indeed since mother, father, sisters and brothers were had a musical career. Mickey had four bros, when he was mere three years old he was compelled by the father(Joseph) to join the Jackson five . Mickey was five when he got to be the lead singer.

His first album "off the wall" was a success , but he wished more because only he knew what he had inside , so he tried hard to make his next album "thriller" every song was a killer .it took him to the peak of music and sealed his position as a music pop icon . Thriller is the biggest selling album of all time . In the thriller era he introduced his famous moon walk , and a silver glove on right hand . Which became extremely famous .

Next album was "bad" this was a great hit ,in which mike had more artistic freedom then his previous two albums . During this time he was extremely criticized due to his paling skin color and his childish attitude , media also played a very negative role in this regard. Mike

Was very upset with this response he told a reporter " why don't you print that Michael is an alien, he eat living chickens " . In this period he made a movie like no other "moonwalker" it was distributed in portions and every portion had a different story . Michael moved to never land a dream world for any child. He was greatly concerned with global affairs he gave 300 million dollars during his career for charity and was known as humanitarian.

His other albums were dangerous, history , blood on the dance floor and invincible .In 1997 Michael made a ground breaking movie 'ghost'. Gradually he became victimized by racial lobbies, media was also unfair in this regard, as it always blamed him for things he had even never anticipated . Michael Jackson made many popular world tours that include bad, dangerous, history and jam .

Mike was accused two times for child molestation. Although it was later proven wrong but it actually changed public opinion for him and they started hating him. Michael was also criticized for his changing appearance .he was also disturbed due to his health and financial problems , for which he had no solution indeed , and due to the same financial problem he was forced to do a last tour in London called 'this is it' .

Mike was now 50 and didn't had spirit like youth but he had to dance so during the rehearsal for upcoming shows, he got a heart arrest and died at 25th June 2009 . He married twice and had tree children . Tributes came from all over the world and every one cherished his music . He will be alive for ever in fans heart. Rest in peace.
kasi_gem   
Feb 20, 2010
Writing Feedback / marvellous pakistan [3]

fighting the storms, combating the terror, shielding the world from barbarians and still having music , literature , art and love in it .this is what the real pakistan is .starting from her initial days pakistan have remained a subject of great interest in international politics .during cold war era both the opponents i.e uncle sam and russia wanted pakistan to be their ally. during a span of just 62 years pakistan had to face certain surgical strikes from its all time enemy india especifically the one of 1973 when india succeeded to segregate pakistan in to two part now bangladesh .

pakistan have beautiful sceneries that are attracting tourists from all around world these include kalam, swat, muree, hunza, ziarat qnd many more that are worth seeing . pakistani nobel-prize winner scientist abdu salam who have solved nuclear physics problems. pakistan is acting actively for the global peace and is paying a hulk price for it.
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