greengrl247
Aug 24, 2010
Undergraduate / NYU Supplement - Bring any person to a special place [7]
Thank you for all your feedback! I feel like I want to see where I can go with the Tory Burch idea just because although the Greg Mortenson will make me seem more well rounded, Tory Burch is truly the one person I would like to spend a day with. However, based on that, do you think that I need to do anything to the first response to improve upon it? Or do you think it is fine as it is with EF Kevin's minor change?
Thank you for all your feedback! I feel like I want to see where I can go with the Tory Burch idea just because although the Greg Mortenson will make me seem more well rounded, Tory Burch is truly the one person I would like to spend a day with. However, based on that, do you think that I need to do anything to the first response to improve upon it? Or do you think it is fine as it is with EF Kevin's minor change?