Posts by Menchie

Menchie

May 13, 2011

Essays / How to write an essay from the movie ("Pay it Forward") [4]

Is there anyone who had seen the movie "Pay it Forward " ? Actually, I need your help guys .. It's an urgent my essay should be pass after 2 days and I find it so hard.

I'm going to write an essay from that movie and my teacher give us the question
Here it is :

What is your opinion of the idea that people's lives can change based on the choices that they make ?

I would really appreciate your response , you can give some ideas , or some topics or opinions, it must be atleast 4 or 5 topics on that sentence.

Thanks !

Menchie

May 13, 2011

Writing Feedback / 'impulse buyer' Do advertisements improve our lives ? [8]

Hi !
I think advertisements don't really improve our lives , it's sort of advertisements are just seducing consumers to buy their products, which we find so amazing and creative when they're doing the advertisements but in actual some of their products are just not really improving our lives. That's just my opinion.

Menchie

May 13, 2011

Poetry / Youth Leadership Club-My First Speech -Topic-Introducing Myself [4]

Hello Sabah Bashir ,

I like the way you introduce yourself , very clean , specific , descriptive and direct to the point. But I had just notice the way you used your punctuation marks , some of them were misplaced and some were missing in some sentence and also the way you capitilize letter or words , proper nouns should be capitilize but all in all it was good ! keep it up !

Menchie

Apr 12, 2011

Essays / How to write an essay about yourself ? [15]

adikako

thank you so much :) i'll try to follow the steps you gave to me.

Menchie

Apr 12, 2011

Essays / How to write an essay about yourself ? [15]

hi !

I'm just new here and i wanna get some ideas on how to write an essay about yourself because i've been having a hard time to write an essay because i'm not that good in english.can some help me please ? we have an assignment about this, the teacher instruct us to write an essay about yourself ,3o things about yourself.

can someone help me or give some ideas ?